Was kind of shocked RWBY suddenly got mixed in, was kind of hoping Percy still went through since he's nearing the age of 12 already. Also, seeing that Kratos still has his godly powers in his current form, I doubt that it wouldn't translate to his own children genetically speaking. This fic is more of an AU with Percy characters used rather than a Percy crossover so I was afraid we wouldn't be seeing much of the Greek side of things, I'm still curious how the current Athena would treat Kratos and I honestly liked their chemistry in the flashbacks you wrote.

Either way, its your story, still enjoyed reading this. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Came across this story and was a fun read! Since Percy is almost 12, will he be joining Camp Half Blood? This feels like an AU more than a Percy crossover so I was still hoping Percy still shows himself in the Greek world through the camp and I've been curious how present Athena would treat Kratos. Either way, its your story.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Who’s Carson

Get. A. God. Damn. Beta. Or. Properly. Review. Your. Chapters. Before. You. Post. Them.

Doesn't Demeter hate Hades for taking her daughter?

Please update

just FYI 0% body fat is basically impossible...

This story is very confused in the tone it wishes to convey in any given moment as well as the kind of story it wishes to tell. In the first chapter, we see Kratos from the perspective of Hestia, and see her mourn the loss of her family, as corrupted as they were, as well as the man Kratos once was in which afterwards she breaks down into hysterics while hearing the prayers of the doomed in Greece only to be touched by the power of hope which renews her spirit as well as purpose. We then immediately go into a comedy sequence in which she searches for a way to revive her family and undue the damage done by Kratos where she finds a bunch of quirky lol so random antics while searching the living quarters of her family. This happens a second time later when Hades is confronted on the existence of Nico and Bianca I’m which it is both a scene that is supposed to invoke tension within the reader, but it was preceded by a comedic scene in which the Olympians openly laughed at Zeus for his suggestion. My advice in creating a story is to: Firstly, keep in mind the characterization of the characters you use within the source material, and secondly, to choose a tone for your story and stick to it with the occasional scene that can be different in order to keep a story from being stale. I wish you luck in your future writing endeavors.

Really a nerf? Wtf can you not

Can you just continue the story instead of all these useless flashbacks

Can you not change his name wtf

Just binged the whole story. Really great can’t wait for the Gods to learn Kratos is actually still alive.

Ahhhh no RWBY

Wait now RWBY’s in this… Percy harem! Percy harem! Percy harem! Percy harem! Percy harem! Percy harem! Percy harem!

Now I'll be waiting for you to fit in Asura from Asuras Wrath. The two angriest dads meet up, shits gonna get serious.