Reviews for Banes of Olympus |
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![]() ![]() Alright I really like this story, in fact it’s better than a good chunk of the Percy Jackson archive here but for the love of god please read over your work before you post; the grammar is killing me. You have a really good plot and story so far you just need to tidy up on the grammar. |
![]() ![]() YASSS! IT HAS FINALLY COME! THAT'S WHAT YOU GET, APOLLO! THAT'S WHAT YOU GET! YOU THINK LORD KRATOS IS AFRAID OF YOU! RAAAAAAAHHH! [continuously slashes Apollo's corpse with Atreus’s knife( Hey, I’m Low-key LOKI. I get Atreus’s knife. IT IS MINE!)] |
![]() ![]() ![]() se sont d'excellent chapitre avec milo mais il aurai du être au début de l'histoire quand carson chercher a comprend d'ou venait les souvenir car la sa coupe l'histoire et sa na pas de rapport c'est un flash back qui ne fait pas progresser l'histoire |
![]() ![]() tAKIGN pITY oN yOU hAS bEEN mY gREATEST mISTAKE kRATOS |
![]() ![]() ![]() damnnnn bro it's goood keep up the great workkk |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even though your grammar is horrible, I still enjoyed it I would like to see more of it so I'll follow, but for god's sake please at least learn the difference between your and you're |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mate this story would have 10 time the amount of everything if you just used the free grammar it before posting new chapters |
![]() ![]() Also, could you do a Kratos x Athena? Kratos x Sally seems too weird and Kratos x Emily Bowman died when Jacob aka. Carson aka. Kratos left to kill the warlord in Africa. Also, I see where this is going. In part two, Apollo gets killed for his actions and is later revived by Hestia after Kratos destroys the world. This story plot explains why Helios showed up GOW III instead of Apollo and why Apollo was screaming at the top of his lungs when he heard of a new Kratos that could destroy Olympus (aka. Percy Jackson). |
![]() ![]() It's true. This story is a diamond in the roughest of the rough. |
![]() ![]() Please post soon, I really like this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems interesting, but the grammar is really bad. So i’m dropping it. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Man you make me cry. Poor Milo. Let see what the future awaits for kratos and Sally. P.D: FUCK YOU APOLO. Thanks again for the chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() A good story so far but holy shit chapter twelve was almost like its own story. Also why the fuck you gotta get me connected to a character just to make me cry bro. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welp Apollo just committed suicide by Kratos. |