Reviews for Banes of Olympus
Guest chapter 13 . 8/1/2021
Alright I really like this story, in fact it’s better than a good chunk of the Percy Jackson archive here but for the love of god please read over your work before you post; the grammar is killing me.

You have a really good plot and story so far you just need to tidy up on the grammar.
Low-key Loki chapter 1 . 7/31/2021
YASSS! IT HAS FINALLY COME! THAT'S WHAT YOU GET, APOLLO! THAT'S WHAT YOU GET! YOU THINK LORD KRATOS IS AFRAID OF YOU! RAAAAAAAHHH!
[continuously slashes Apollo's corpse with Atreus’s knife( Hey, I’m Low-key LOKI. I get Atreus’s knife. IT IS MINE!)]
Ikki85 chapter 13 . 7/28/2021
se sont d'excellent chapitre avec milo mais il aurai du être au début de l'histoire quand carson chercher a comprend d'ou venait les souvenir car la sa coupe l'histoire et sa na pas de rapport c'est un flash back qui ne fait pas progresser l'histoire
Guest chapter 13 . 7/27/2021
tAKIGN pITY oN yOU hAS bEEN mY gREATEST mISTAKE kRATOS
BakaReiiiii chapter 13 . 7/26/2021
damnnnn bro it's goood keep up the great workkk
p6lishb6kser chapter 12 . 7/26/2021
Even though your grammar is horrible, I still enjoyed it
I would like to see more of it so I'll follow, but for god's sake please at least learn the difference between your and you're
AlphaKenny1 chapter 5 . 7/14/2021
Mate this story would have 10 time the amount of everything if you just used the free grammar it before posting new chapters
Low-key Loki chapter 1 . 7/12/2021
Also, could you do a Kratos x Athena? Kratos x Sally seems too weird and Kratos x Emily Bowman died when Jacob aka. Carson aka. Kratos left to kill the warlord in Africa. Also, I see where this is going. In part two, Apollo gets killed for his actions and is later revived by Hestia after Kratos destroys the world. This story plot explains why Helios showed up GOW III instead of Apollo and why Apollo was screaming at the top of his lungs when he heard of a new Kratos that could destroy Olympus (aka. Percy Jackson).
Low-key Loki chapter 12 . 7/12/2021
It's true. This story is a diamond in the roughest of the rough.
Low-key Loki chapter 12 . 7/12/2021
Please post soon, I really like this story.
GatorWithShades chapter 2 . 7/11/2021
Seems interesting, but the grammar is really bad. So i’m dropping it.
GatorWithShades chapter 1 . 7/11/2021
Alligator
David Daniel B chapter 12 . 7/11/2021
Man you make me cry.
Poor Milo.
Let see what the future awaits for kratos and Sally.
P.D: FUCK YOU APOLO.
Thanks again for the chapter
Daysrim chapter 12 . 7/4/2021
A good story so far but holy shit chapter twelve was almost like its own story. Also why the fuck you gotta get me connected to a character just to make me cry bro.
Devilboy101 chapter 12 . 7/2/2021
Welp Apollo just committed suicide by Kratos.
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