|Reviews for Mercenary Road|
| Jornambre chapter 10 . 5/2
Really like the story as a whole. Keep it up!
| Nameless Godless chapter 4 . 3/28
Just waiting for that unique thing that makes the Mc special and stand put from the grown like most important characters.
I vote he gets some kind of Shape Shifting if only because of the irony of the fact he is now one of those complicated things that does not die when he is headshotted.
Could start simple with increasing muscle mass and density before stuff like partial Shifting a hand to be covered in scales.
Main inspiration for this is a scene I thought of where he has a bounty that refuses to leave a safe compound and has no overlooks to snipe from so the Mc shifts into a Rakk flys up and shifts back mid air into a free fall then snipes the guy mid air. Which just sounds badass and as we know badass things belong on Pandora.
| Nameless Godless chapter 2 . 3/28
Outside of the when you use ,, and notat the start of speak this is pretty great.
The speak mistakes though really take you out of the mood for the scene you were setting up and kinda ruined it if those are fixed it is a depressing but great read