Reviews for Why not |
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ChronosMoon chapter 13 . 1/15 I would love to see a continuation to this story in the Lucifer TV Universe |
Warrof chapter 13 . 1/2 Yet another Deus Ex Machina... Still a fun read, and that is all that matters. I particularly appreciate the tasteful way you dealt with bedroom activities. |
majere4 chapter 13 . 12/13/2024 I think my favorite thing about this story is how much it makes me smile. I know I mentioned that earlier, but what better way to finish my appraisal of your storytelling then to confirm that it made me smile? |
majere4 chapter 12 . 12/13/2024 " The house seemed to have developed a sense of humour. " Hah! First the library now the house itself it seems that Harry's life is rarely dull. . . Our church supports a couple of child rescue organizations, one of them being ARC the Association for Recovery of Children. Bazzal Baz is a larger than life hero that runs it. It is one of the sickest parts of our darkest members of this human race. I could see Harry being terribly conflicted at not simply tearing the world apart in the pursuit of rescuing the children and obliterating the scourge of child trafficking from the planet. Unfortunately, the scum that pay for all this hell on Earth would not be likely to simply go away... although with his computer capabilities, perhaps he could track them down and physically eviscerate them while giving public recognition of their crimes. If that happened all over the world, Time After Time After Time, even the richest and most perverse would have to keep their sickness to their own minds. It's on how your story has been lighthearted for the most part up until this point and I never once expounded upon personal ideas of fantasies involving Harry's powers, until now. |
majere4 chapter 11 . 12/13/2024 This continues to be smooth and entertaining with a fair bit of spiciness in the last couple of chapters LOL |
majere4 chapter 10 . 12/13/2024 " Caius, on the other hand, had started making a plan. " There's always one lol I like how you worked this all out. Aro's ability was used to avoid most of the stupidity - if he'd only been wiser in restraining his attack dogs (Jane and Alec) he'd still have their services. Instead, Harry has two more mouths to feed... and I'll look forward to seeing how far into mental slavery he's put them. |
majere4 chapter 9 . 12/12/2024 A fair bit of relationship wrangling but all's well that... is approaching, maybe, some peaceable resolution? |
majere4 chapter 8 . 12/12/2024 Interesting. The first hint of a challenge and it's a (another probably hot) young woman lusting after Harry! LOL The fact that this will open up a lot of possibilities for positive change is probably the last thing on the headstrong alpha's mind. Looks like it might be time for Jake to step up! Still, I meant to address the lack of conflict at the beginning of this chapter and it's funny that the story is moving along and entertaining me just fine without there being any looming threat. I mean, you made it clear that Harry can snuff out the Volturi with nary an effort so a horny wolf attaching herself to a vampire coven is as close as they are going to get to real conflict... and I'm amused to find that I'm just fine with that. |
majere4 chapter 7 . 12/12/2024 Casually-mad-scientist/ magical-demigod!Harry Yep, that's my tag for our messy hair in your fic D |
majere4 chapter 6 . 12/12/2024 I think my favorite thing about your writing is that I find myself smiling a lot. |
majere4 chapter 5 . 12/12/2024 You're doing much more work to lay the background and character development than most authors and I'm loving it. |
majere4 chapter 4 . 12/12/2024 Hah! Typical Harry, he either falls into the fire or into the fantasy. Either way, he's got that 'been there, done that, have a whole rack of t-shirts' vibe that fits perfectly with his experience level. I think the most bad-arse thing about him is how laid back he is. He is in control and he has no worries, it's rather refreshing from the much more common 'scrambling to survive' Harrys. |
majere4 chapter 3 . 12/12/2024 It's repetitive, but it bears repeating: this is a ton of fun! |
majere4 chapter 2 . 12/11/2024 I'm amazed at how fun this is. I cannot remember the last time that these two fandoms did not have angstyAngst! flowing like a river through the plot. Great characters, fun 'tricks' - the fact that some are magic and some sci-fi tech is all the better! |
majere4 chapter 1 . 12/11/2024 Great stuff, lots of questions answered, and lots more produced, just as an opening chapter should be! |