Reviews for Why not |
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![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE PLEASE write a short story sequel to this story. Of who came and who stayed behind. Thank you again for this Amazing story. Take care and stay Healthy, Happy and Strong. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, I wanted to tell you how so very much I am thankful that you wrote this Amazing story, then share it with all of us. I can't begin to tell you how much am enjoying reading this. I found this story late Sunday night its now 2am Tuesday morning. But I think I will |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should consider making this a series, even if it’s just a short one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would be interesting to see if they would switch universe with him And it would be even more interesting to go to vampire diaries universe next Rebecca and Freya comes to mind |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it, would like to see a somewhat of a continuation either where he ended up or prequels of the previous worlds he mentioned |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who went with him to the next world, though? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was fun! I enjoyed reading this adventure; it was a refreshing twist. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is interesting but why ruin it with Harry gunning for someones girlfriend right frim the start. her characters been ruined as now after she said "I'll have your babies" I've lost all respect for this character you created. this is why i dislike harems. A fantasy that ruins all other aspects of the story with it's prescense. like a fly in soup. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a fun read. Thanks for sharing and on to my favorites. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked the story for the most part. I could have done without Harry's wives or the romance, however the rest of the story more than made up for it, and made me want to continue reading. I have not checked your profile yes, so do not know what others stories you have written, however, I would be really interested in reading some of Harry's other exploits. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story! Thank you for sharing your talent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely story. Lovely ending. Thank you so much for sharing it! |