Reviews for Why not |
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![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for this.. it was great |
![]() ![]() ![]() such a good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t think that Alec is his wife, when im sure you meant Kate… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Second time reading this story and i seriously gotta give you props for the character writting. Charlie in particualr has always been one of my favorite book characters overall and its nice to read about him again in this story. Thanks for this |
![]() ![]() ![]() MUCH better than I was expecting when I found it by accident. Super OP Harry Potter in the Twilight Universe making things a lot better for the supernatural world as a whole. More slice of life than anything else, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't like that the MC's "mates" are now just shoving themselves into every second of his life and he's just accepting it. Have some effing personal space. Beyond that, the harem like almost every harem ever written is very quickly forced together with little effort. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Thank you for writing it. I hope you write a sequel in another universe. If you don't, thank you anyways. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a nice history, thank you very much. Sometimes allows wonderful people like you to share their works and provides us with wonder and enjoyment. |
![]() ![]() Sorry if this is rambly but here we go. I loved this story, it had fun amounts of horny bits, even if I wish there was more horny I still felt satisfied with the balance of romance and light smut. The thing I liked most about this story compared to ‘Harry Black’ and ‘Harry Odinson’ was the lack of science jargon that slide off my brain and I couldn’t focus on. For me this story focused more on the relationships of characters I liked (mainly Harry, ok only Harry). Ultimately I do hope more smutty stories come from you but I get it’s not everyone’s cup of tea. That being said I’ve yet to start on Origins but to be fair these are mostly long reads, which I love, ‘give me more please’ I say. |
![]() ![]() A beautiful story! Thank you for sharing this with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have to give continuity to the personality of the character (Harry Potter), talk about his past where it is inferred that he participated in many wars, and also judged many people, where he had to witness evidence of crimes equal to or worse than what he saw. in this chapter. Therefore, the loss of control of emotions is exaggerated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A whole chain of sequels to this would be absolutely fantastic, maybe with a gradual power rise too for his base body to accommodate his girls and any he may pick up in those worlds. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Id love to read more of this harry, and his lives, and adventures. Preqal, or sequal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never mind my last comment. Andrea is the chef. I thought it was a woman. |