Reviews for Narcissa Black, Lord Potter's Concubine
gaharbert chapter 13 . 12/30/2024
this has to be one of the best stories I have read in a long time keep up the great work
Bronze chapter 1 . 10/7/2024
Good Ole Fumblemort really screwed everything up. His moronic idea of the Greater Good and continually giving everyone second chances lead to a world where those types thought nothing of murdering, raping and torturing anyone they didn't like or didn't follow their beliefs. Which lead directly to the rise of Tom Riddle and the needless deaths of too many witches and wizards. Just how many families did he cause to die out may never be known because way too many believe he could do no wrong. He could never ask for help as he saw himself as infallible. Now Harry and friends are left to pick up the pieces. Which in no way shape or form will likely work. Good Ole Fumblemort left an overly corrupt government in his wake. Unless and until the Death Eaters are all killed or imprisoned for life nothing will really change. The two major questions I'd like answered are, how much did he steal personally from the Potter Vaults and how much from the school?
BarbedCaress chapter 13 . 9/24/2024
Well done!
Taliesin The Eternal Bard chapter 13 . 7/14/2024
You do realize you set yourself up For sequel right
divvycrip chapter 13 . 5/9/2024
Truely excellent story. I laughed, i snorted and i chuckled. I recommended it to a friend.

My only suggestion would have been that more of it should be story rather than narrative

Thank you very much
hunzbookwyrm chapter 12 . 4/15/2024
Great story can't wait to see what you do next!
Guest chapter 13 . 3/26/2024
That was AMAZING
texan-muggle chapter 8 . 2/1/2024
I'm re-reading this (again) and I just noticed something...

In Chapter 6, you stated that *all* Death Eaters were chattel to Harry Potter. He also stripped the magic from *all* surviving Death Eaters except for Draco Malfoy.

So how are there any Death Eaters in attendance at Narcissa's trial for Harry to call on?
MRGwrites chapter 6 . 1/25/2024
LOL I'm a virgin, I'm just really bad at it.
LoneWolfAndCub chapter 11 . 12/1/2023
Mah Man, Dudley 'Gigachad" Dursley finally grows a pair.
Luiz4200 chapter 12 . 11/19/2023
Dudley being denied a biscuit? It must have happened at primary school. It wouldn't have happened at Privet Drive and Harry couldn't have seen it happen at Smeltings.
Luiz4200 chapter 10 . 11/18/2023
I presume it's only out of diplomatic courtesy the Queen won't reveal the wizarding world to muggles who aren't her subjects.
Luiz4200 chapter 9 . 11/18/2023
Oh, if Sirius were alive to see that moment...
Luiz4200 chapter 3 . 11/13/2023
It seems Narcissa's plan hit a snag.
Luiz4200 chapter 2 . 11/12/2023
Hermione is just realizing how horrible Harry's childhood was.
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