Reviews for Narcissa Black, Lord Potter's Concubine |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this has to be one of the best stories I have read in a long time keep up the great work |
![]() ![]() Good Ole Fumblemort really screwed everything up. His moronic idea of the Greater Good and continually giving everyone second chances lead to a world where those types thought nothing of murdering, raping and torturing anyone they didn't like or didn't follow their beliefs. Which lead directly to the rise of Tom Riddle and the needless deaths of too many witches and wizards. Just how many families did he cause to die out may never be known because way too many believe he could do no wrong. He could never ask for help as he saw himself as infallible. Now Harry and friends are left to pick up the pieces. Which in no way shape or form will likely work. Good Ole Fumblemort left an overly corrupt government in his wake. Unless and until the Death Eaters are all killed or imprisoned for life nothing will really change. The two major questions I'd like answered are, how much did he steal personally from the Potter Vaults and how much from the school? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You do realize you set yourself up For sequel right |
![]() ![]() ![]() Truely excellent story. I laughed, i snorted and i chuckled. I recommended it to a friend. My only suggestion would have been that more of it should be story rather than narrative Thank you very much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story can't wait to see what you do next! |
![]() ![]() That was AMAZING |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm re-reading this (again) and I just noticed something... In Chapter 6, you stated that *all* Death Eaters were chattel to Harry Potter. He also stripped the magic from *all* surviving Death Eaters except for Draco Malfoy. So how are there any Death Eaters in attendance at Narcissa's trial for Harry to call on? |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL I'm a virgin, I'm just really bad at it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mah Man, Dudley 'Gigachad" Dursley finally grows a pair. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dudley being denied a biscuit? It must have happened at primary school. It wouldn't have happened at Privet Drive and Harry couldn't have seen it happen at Smeltings. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I presume it's only out of diplomatic courtesy the Queen won't reveal the wizarding world to muggles who aren't her subjects. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, if Sirius were alive to see that moment... |
![]() ![]() ![]() It seems Narcissa's plan hit a snag. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hermione is just realizing how horrible Harry's childhood was. |