Sorry mistyped: 10 UAP and 1 UPP

At level 3, he’s missing 10 UAP and 10 UPP

You said that Rob Stark had to marry a northern lady since his father married an southern lady. A stark can't have two generations of southern ladies. so the Rob going after Jon's sister is a contradiction of your own words. The story would of been better if she died in kings landing.

Please write more

I loved this fic, are you going to continue it? I know it's discouraging to have been plagiarized so blatantly, but please don't give up on a work of art like this story.

My third time through reading your atory and I still get choked up when Jamie knights Jon ️

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I have thoroughly enjoyed the story and hope that you finish it.

Fantastic!

FUCKING knew it! my god! your levels of bullshit just surpassed 9000! *meme of Vegeta destroying his tracer*

dude... im gonna be honest with you... the amount of bulshit you pull in this chapter is outstaunding, like holy fuck! i gonna be honest pulling the ashara is alive and then BOOM blood magic? really? but the worst of all are you telling me oberyn is happily married? i know this is an AU but... you need to put some limits. also if you keep pulling shit like this it wouldnt surprise me if rhaegar and ellia's daughter is alive as well.

Don't read this if you actually want to follow the main character

I started out really liking the story, but in the end it went the way of every other Game of Thrones fanfiction, with the author, needing to constantly show 12 other peoples points of view, instead of just following the main plot line with the main character. I understand setting up a plot, but when you don’t get the main characters point of view for four chapters, it starts to get boring. This is supposed to be a sort of gamer fic. At this point it’s just another Game of Thrones trope with 12 main characters.

I wish Ned didn't tell Catelyn about Jon's parentage just to be able to not read that cringe scene.

Rhaegar was convinced that Lyanna was carrying a girl but was also convinced that her child would be the Prince who was Promised and left 'her' a valyrian steel sword?

Rhaegar believed 'the dragon must have three heads', and this included Elia's pretend baby?

Elia never gave any hint of these groundbreaking developments to her brothers, even?

I won't even go into how stupid the 'letter to Brandon' part was. But there are major plot holes all over this page.

This might be too late to point out, but Asher Forrester committed murder in this chapter. He had no legal right to kill Ramsay after he was captured. No lord would've allowed it. Especially not Ned Stark.