Reviews for Champion of the Winter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That's a very entertaining and intriguing story. Your take on the characters is very well thought out and the plot so captivating. I don't know whether or not you are still working on this story but I'll definitely keep an eye on future updates. |
![]() ![]() Yeah liked it until it began to do multiple pov... like we get 1 in 2-3 chapter with jon pov... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry mistyped: 10 UAP and 1 UPP |
![]() ![]() ![]() At level 3, he’s missing 10 UAP and 10 UPP |
![]() ![]() ![]() You said that Rob Stark had to marry a northern lady since his father married an southern lady. A stark can't have two generations of southern ladies. so the Rob going after Jon's sister is a contradiction of your own words. The story would of been better if she died in kings landing. |
![]() ![]() Please write more |
![]() ![]() I loved this fic, are you going to continue it? I know it's discouraging to have been plagiarized so blatantly, but please don't give up on a work of art like this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My third time through reading your atory and I still get choked up when Jamie knights Jon ️ |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have thoroughly enjoyed the story and hope that you finish it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() FUCKING knew it! my god! your levels of bullshit just surpassed 9000! *meme of Vegeta destroying his tracer* |
![]() ![]() ![]() dude... im gonna be honest with you... the amount of bulshit you pull in this chapter is outstaunding, like holy fuck! i gonna be honest pulling the ashara is alive and then BOOM blood magic? really? but the worst of all are you telling me oberyn is happily married? i know this is an AU but... you need to put some limits. also if you keep pulling shit like this it wouldnt surprise me if rhaegar and ellia's daughter is alive as well. |
![]() ![]() Don't read this if you actually want to follow the main character |
![]() ![]() ![]() I started out really liking the story, but in the end it went the way of every other Game of Thrones fanfiction, with the author, needing to constantly show 12 other peoples points of view, instead of just following the main plot line with the main character. I understand setting up a plot, but when you don’t get the main characters point of view for four chapters, it starts to get boring. This is supposed to be a sort of gamer fic. At this point it’s just another Game of Thrones trope with 12 main characters. |