Reviews for Champion of the Winter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This might be too late to point out, but Asher Forrester committed murder in this chapter. He had no legal right to kill Ramsay after he was captured. No lord would've allowed it. Especially not Ned Stark. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alperez 16 didnt write the dragon cub they inherited it from dominant ally who is as far as i know the original writer |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loving your story please please please finish it ss far as yoy can! You are a fantastic storyteller! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude, your fanfic is really awesome. I wish it had continued, because it was looking great, as a fan of Assassin's Creed I simply loved the little references made so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story and hope you come back to it soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is great, can't wait to read more of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. I hope for a new chapter soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please Update Soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is very good and I really like the gamer side because its different from everything else. The only downside I have is very small and petty but its to do with other languages. I would rather having them in bold or italics then having it put down twice. As I have said its petty. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed this and hope you continue. As for game elements I say just give more quest alerts and level updates, maybe have him use his observe function more. Regardless looking forward to the next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this man that heated argument was great |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man im i love that he gets a new horse |
![]() ![]() ![]() glad that Ned got a direwolf too |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jon is such a coward in every conversation in this story. He rarely stands up for himself amd when he does it seems to be halfhearted. He also gets mad at Robb for standing up to him |