Reviews for Champion of the Winter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, what an amazing story so far! I read the AN at the beginning and I hope that you do not loose interest in finishing this story. The intrigue and political byplay in the story is awesome! I really hope for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've enjoyed the story and hope you return to it someday. Tks |
![]() ![]() ![]() I demand an immediate update to this intriguingly amazing story my talented author! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! I was waiting for the revenge |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh how I love this. More soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() начиналось хорошо а превратилось в фарс какой то вместо того чтобы двигать сюжет начались вводы каких то левых персонажей которые тут ну никак не нужны |
![]() ![]() ![]() too melodramatic. wtf |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just wanted to say that this has become one of my most favored pieces of fan fiction I have ever read, and not just for ASOIAF. The characterizations and world building are just the chefs kiss. The action sequences are engaging and easily crafted in the imagination. I aplore you to continue this story, it has the potential to stand atop the mountain as the best story in not just this category, but in the entire fanfiction website. |
![]() ![]() In Essos Jon could find Orphanmaker. Truth is in Lys. And he could find Brightroar and other valyrian artifacts in Old Valyria. |
![]() ![]() *Mira Forrester not Meera Forrester |
![]() ![]() ![]() F..ing Baelish! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story, finally finished binge reading all of it! Can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Might be late to the party on this one but don't second guess yourself. In writing you have to keep your plotline flowing, dont linger too much on a thought. Let it sit for a few weeks or months depending on how much time you truly have between posts and change it if it does not make sense, or keep it. What you come to doubt here could be a minor hiccup or it could be the cornerstone for the future plotlines. That said...it isn't bad. It's different, interesting, and uses characters that for some reason just get left behind by other writers of similar threads. 9 chapters to go as of this moment, but so far it is well worth the read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just give Jon a harem |