Reviews for Champion of the Winter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow what a chapter such a great and interesting read cant wait to see where this please update as soon as you can please thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had never seen the concept of a Gamer AU before. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this. |
![]() ![]() lets go great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyable read! Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good stuff! Hope for more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think the use of magical bracer is a mistake as it is a magic alien from planetos. Good story otherwise |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far, I like the story. It's not a rehash of cannon and that Skagoosi invasion is interesting to follow. For all the people that find it hard to believe that the Skaagoi can sneak into the North so easy, unseen, keep in mind that the North isn't quite populated. It is the biggest of the seven kingdoms, but it has probably one of the lowest numbers of people. Not all regions are populated, etc. And it is easy enough to travel in such lands unseen since I doubt there is a lot of traveling going on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, the start of the story is a bit misleading. It heavily points towards the fact that Jon is an outsider, etc., ignored by everyone, and that he gets treated worse than in the show. But even after that comment from Robb, the next chapters have Jon living like in these stories where only Catelyn and maybe Theon are the only sources of his discomfort. Idk, the following chapters aren't really showing that he has a crappy life. But the first and second to some degree made it appear as if Jon is going to leave Winterfell soon because everyone is a dick. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay so far it's interesting even though it's not entirely what I was expecting. I do have some questions. 1st Will Jon get more stuff from AC verse as long as it isn't things like guns or the old relic's by the first? 2nd Will there be OC's based on certain characters from the AC games to aid Jon in his journey? 3rd Why haven't we seen reactions from the south on what's happening around Jon? Cause I think the old fat drunk would upset he missed out on a fight. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So those bracers he's wearing are they normal leather bracers or one of the creed ones? |
![]() ![]() ![]() A castle of size Winterfel should have multiple stablestable boys. So Robb and Jon shouldn't ready their house by themselves. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So does he use his inventory for anything other than gold, you haven't mentioned him putting anything in it since he learned of it, also this is an amazing story so far and I'm loving it keep up the great work I look forward to what's next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quick question… why don’t you use the inventory? |
![]() ![]() ![]() good stories |
![]() ![]() My suggestion for a pairing is dacey Mormont look at her picture in a song of ice and fire |