Reviews for Champion of the Winter |
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![]() ![]() Finalyy a better chapter. One weakness of the gamer fic is author spend many words for the game notifications. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It did feel a bit rushed but was okay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() can you have Jon bond with a shadowcat cub, Snow bear cub, and a white dragon with red spots, red wings, and red eyes, as well as Ghost and Gale. Name the bear Glacier, The Cat Grim, and the dragon Galleon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im not sure saying he used a pilum is the best idea its a throwing weapon and bends the soon as it hits something usually so it cant be used by the enemy a spear would make much more sense. Also the skagosi arent wildlings just savages like the mountain clans but worse since they are a vassal of house stark id assume Ned will be pissed they attacked. He should really give skagos to someone else its fucking huge about the size of all the iron islands put together or a bit bigger cant remember. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There were some good fights described in this chapter. The ax and knife thing reminds me of Mel Gibson in "The Patriot" though he really should keep his bird with him in case he needs to do unexpected scouting in the future. Was this raiding party part of the group that kidnapped one of the Umber ladies from canon that now got butterflied away? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a wonderful chapter. thank you for taking the time out of your day to write this masterpiece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck yes this chapter was amazing, I'm in love with this story, keep going like this, can't wait to see more. PS: sorry if i made mistake english is not my language |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO BEAR THE STING! HOHOHOHOHOHOHO I am pleased |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll bear with the bear puns fon now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why are bears always so angy? |
![]() ![]() ![]() hope to read more. |
![]() ![]() "Robb will venture further down the Kingsroad southwards and Jon will turn towards west." The Karstarks are in the east. |
![]() ![]() Very good story. Glad i found it and hope you won't abandon it like so many gamers storys are. But you do realise that you don't need to give Alperez16 credit for Lady Jonelle Cerwyn. She is a canon character. At least book canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Should get some good training in at the karhold lot of good fighters |
![]() ![]() ![]() My, what a beautiful start :D |