| Reviews for Champion of the Winter |
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   The Lord Bread chapter 7 . 4/12/2021 I'm proud of you... you avoided the constany stat filler, but still use relevant information... you are learning...you will join the nine... or the four if you're a WHO fan... |
| I.Will.Do.It.Myself chapter 1 . 4/12/2021 There was never any indication that Jon was treated poorly by household staff, there was never any hint of any staff brought about by Catelyn. Ned remaining silent in the face of blatant disrespect towards Jon even if it is by Robb is unheard of in cannon. Even Septa Mordane being blatantly disrespectful towards Jon is doubtful. Noble bastards being looked down upon by nobles is to be expected, but commoners disrespecting noble bastards? That just doesn't happen, even when mockingly called 'Lord Snow' Jon is called a Lord. And Jon certainly wasn't treated like most noble bastards either, with exception of Stark Name, Jon had everything his siblings had, he was trained to be leader of men, a commander on battlefield. He danced with noble ladies of the North, commoners can't even touch a noble lady without fear of losing a hand, Jon having classical Stark look had only endeared him to other Northern Lords. There wasn't much protest when Robb named Jon his heir if you remember. Jon has enough angst and his life has enough conflict, there is no need to shit on established characters to raise stakes, Jon is sympathetic enough, there is no reason to twist Robb and Ned into caricatures of themselves. |
| WeberCode chapter 6 . 4/11/2021 Next chapter! |
| TheSoundOfThunderingEngines chapter 5 . 4/11/2021 I think your spelling valyrian wrong. Either this has been good beside from that. |
| GrimScarlet chapter 6 . 4/10/2021 Pretty good |
| Zoom99 chapter 6 . 4/9/2021 You put up stats every chapter. Why use an entire chapter for stats. Seems redundant |
| Zoom99 chapter 3 . 4/9/2021 I wish he’d stop being so confused by everything. |
| matiasleissoder97 chapter 6 . 4/9/2021 I really like this so far |
| The Lord Bread chapter 6 . 4/9/2021 HEHE YES HE STRONQ |
| The Lord Bread chapter 6 . 4/9/2021 This story makes me hungie... |
| The Lord Bread chapter 5 . 4/9/2021 Wait a minute... HE JUST DESECRATED THE FREAKIN HEART TREE! That is like execution express in the north |
| The Lord Bread chapter 5 . 4/9/2021 Is it wrong to be wanting a 10 year old to slay infidels? |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/7/2021 Good story so far always need more gamer fics As I was reading something that sort of stuck out was the use of exclamation points everywhere even when not needed not a big problem or anything just wanted Draw your attention to it |
| asonia99 chapter 6 . 4/9/2021 kinda have a concern here, if select ppl have high stats in strength int etc... that'd make this a high fantasy world, cause having 10 times the strength of an average Joe is kinda weird. Maybe the mountain having 5ish times the average can be believable, but it should be kinda really rareish imo |
| Mhalelowman chapter 6 . 4/9/2021 I can't wait for more |