I need moar! this is great

so after winning a bout people insulting their opponent is normal?...I don't know what to say

so is robb a good guy or not? that's very confusing.

Man's (Boy really) got a silver tongue

right... first thing, F U Ned, a kid being mad at being treated like shit doesn't need "wolfblood" to snap -.-... exploring esos and other places sounds awesome imo :p easy way to introduce "magic" too if Jon goes to eastern esos and unexplored continents (sothoryos).
really hoping you don't name him Aegon tough, that's his half-brother name...

I think I am an amphibious mammal

How long will it take for him to grow up?
Will there be dungeons?

Very promising.

This was a really good chapter! I especially loved Jon's little outburst! Great job, man!

wow fuck you ned

Looks good I wonder where will you take the story

Please start a new paragraph wherever someone says/thinks something. You can't have multiple people chatting in the same paragraph. Each character should get their own paragraph aa is the rule for when you're writing dialogue.

I'm glad Jon as a character isn't being unreasonable. He chose choices that too us may seem weak, but to him, are the most straightforward and familiar.

If you dare stop before 500k words I will spam your pm's...

This story is too good...

Although authors usually abandon Gamer fics...

Please don't...

I like this one...

Also there is no crossover tag...