Reviews for Champion of the Winter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Also at the start of the second paragraph Four years old should be Four year old |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story portrait is harry potter. Change it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always enjoy the genre, hope to see plenty of updates. The biggest thing I suggest is to not focus to much of the writing on rehashing stats and perks. If you need to put it in do it every 5th or 10th chapter. mention upgrades as part of the story but the story is the key to success |
![]() ![]() ![]() good so far how often will you be updating |