Reviews for time itself
Guest chapter 2 . 8/16/2011
way too rushed but really good! I mind good better than 'rushed':) awesome fic please continue but lemme tell you one thing :


jazmin chapter 2 . 7/7/2009
um ok im jus gonna say this ounce WHY DID YOU STOP WRITING PLEASE! CONTINUE!MAKE it as long as possible!
Sk8er765 chapter 2 . 6/13/2006
hey, i really like how you describes things and such. anyway, great stor!
jlhx chapter 2 . 12/5/2005
tis story don rly stink..i kinda lyk the hip tattoo bit
snowboarder9 chapter 2 . 7/16/2005
nice chapter, keep up the good work
Hobasteritch chapter 2 . 7/10/2005
I really love this story! It is really wonderfuk! this is my seventh time reading it i think. Please update soon.!
theflamehat chapter 2 . 1/25/2005
cool story!
yay chapter 2 . 10/6/2004
Make another chapter or a sequel.
Girlpaula chapter 2 . 8/21/2004
Gosen the Saiya-Jin chapter 2 . 11/30/2003
This fic is a little confusing but very good _ Please read mine if u have time
krimsonkiller not signed in chapter 2 . 9/30/2003
this fic doesn't has potential...but right now it's just a little to...random looking. If you have a story aside from the jimmy/cindy and rare libby/carl next chapter would be a good time to let it show...then again it is about 3:30am so i might be missing it. you write well...some minor grammer/punctuation errors, but nothing unreadable. keep it up...i'm not slamming the story..its good.
Telle chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
This is really good. I can't wait for more!
digidave chapter 2 . 7/1/2003
angel-hottie087 chapter 2 . 6/21/2003
Good! Oh yeah, for chapter 1 though, I don't think Jimmy should have spiked hair. He looks fine with his regular hair! That's my opinion though.
NeutronGrl15 chapter 2 . 6/20/2003
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