Hey, W1ngs do you go by Moonlight on Webnovel? Because that person has posted this fic there, and I wanna let you know they also have a Patreon. So yup.
If you're the same person that's cool, just letting ya know.

good story...definitely could have been better...way better...but what can we do...I wonder whatever happened to Achilles...he just croaked and disappeared...I for sure thought that Rhoynish magic would play some part, I thought Achillws was important...buf then he just stopped existing...that's just one of the many mistakes and questionable choices you made with the story...but whatever, I was enjoying it for a long while at first and then you drained my love for the story as you went on, I just finished it because of obligations...

thar was disgusting...why did you have to ruin it like that...you're wack af for that

why is he indulging and entertaining the whims of children? the conversation makes them sound so childish, its so cliche

for references i doubt they were using pounds as a unit for weight, more accurately to use stone. For instant a stone would equal to 14 pounds, and they definitely did not ask if you were "ok" these kinds of conversation misspoke takes away from the story by breaking fantasy continuity.

I mean i havent really read mc pov so i am not even gonna read more cus i dont like this story my main problem is that ot was not mentioned in the thing that is ubder the name of the story

I'm sure that I'm not the first to tell you this but this is an absolutely beautiful piece of work. So much of the beauty in this clearly has gone over many people's heads. I don't know what you do, but I hope that you keep writing. Thank you for this.

so the pirates freeing slaves are going to brothels that own slave and are therefore raping slaves?

soft motherfucker.

why the heck he does not kill daimon boy? killing him is not a cruel thing rather mercy. moron.

pet names? for humans use pet names really? shaming your name with shortening to satisfy their thirst of emotions?

why the fuck you are saying sorry to someone? you don't have dignity and pride to stick with your words? just some yelling prone to say sorry? why? because someone elses emotions? weak.

so mc Take Poles in his hole, so much waste of a good story even though i dont know whats going on

Ottimo lavoro molto interresante!

What happened to Margaery's daughter with "Renly"?