Just finished bing reading this gem, Other than the whole sith tattoo which do look awesome and the fact that your another writer who has yet again fallen for Natalie Dormer (Not that I blame you mate) this was an enjoyed read so thank you.

Essa fanfiction é incrível de todos os jeitos que se olha, ainda mais o crossover com star wars, a única coisa que realmente me desagrada e deixa muito chateado é essa parte dele pintar o corpo inteiro, incluindo o rosto, sinceramente os braços, mãos, dedos, pescoço, pernas e pés tudo bem, mais o rosto é foda; sempre achei a coisa mais ridícula do mundo que tatua o rosto.

The story was good bro definitely will re-read in the future, the only problem I had with it was that there wasn't any lemons.

Kudos, Kudos, Kudos

Do you forget what you write? Hes talking all that shit about never killing innocent children when he litterally tortured an innnocent child to death with his lightning. All because he happened to be in the arms of the woman he was going to kill.

Also, so many fights and problems could have been avoided if he just used his force powers more. Like with the servants that exposed them in the keep, easy force grab to hold them in place from running away.

The armies? Could have knocked most of them out with some lightning. Theyre all wearing or holding metal of some kind. Perfect conductors. You literally only have him use any abilities like party tricks here and there. What even is the point of him having the force if hes not gonna use it?

Why even bother with the small group to push into the red keep when he alone could have snuck in and brought out both Cersei and Joffrey to use as “hostages” to get jnto the city.

Im gonna finish it since im so far into it already but seriously, if youre gonna pick and choose when hes smart about his powers and abilities, let us know.

Gotta love sassy Bean.

God, how i hate every fanfiction marrying off Margaery to their MC. It just kills any mood to want to keep reading rhe story honestly. Manipulative cunts, all of them. Its just okay cause shes kinda pretty in the tv show

Fantastic overall story, the only thing that confused me was Ghost being there suddenly with no context or background info. Otherwise a very entertaining read.

Ok wtf. Where did ghost come from literally just appears fully grown when u never mentioned any direwolves in the story.

The claim of robert and jis brothers was not merely because of some grandmother. The founder of house baratheon was founded by Orys Baratheon, haöf brother to aegon the conqueror. He married the daughter of the last storm Kind. His legitimization amd claim is founded on that. The anti-dragonpawn rants are a bit over the top, he hated rhaegar and the mad King but his right to the throne and later of his brothers was based on that relation.

Essos is a Continent. Braavos lies on the northwestern shore of Essos

Many faceD God
Valyria , Valyrian steel , Valyria

Had to cringe each time they were misspelled but otherwise good story

His a bit too people pleasing.

The mc does like to waste his breath huh, he has a habit of conversing with fanatical idiots who obviously will not cower to his own perception. He should use his powers more often, very effective on silencing a room, a bit of bone and neck snap will silence those fools instantly. He really needs to walk his talk, for all his bravado about vengence he sure is a bit lenient on his foes, he evens debates with them like a polite scholar. U'd expect some ruthlessness and a bit tyranny from him for being merged with a former sith, but nah his acting more like a vigilante hero in this fic.

Most throne players have an intelligence of a common thug in this fic. Every bad guys are dumb as hell, they are stubbornly vengeful and stupid enough to unnecessarily ADMIT every crime and backhanded schemes they did in face of someone that could behead them instantly, I don't understand y they would blurt out every plan they made like some Scooby Doo villain when they are caught. Little finger in canon would pretend to beg and act like the coward he is to preserve his life, but in this fic he'll just CONFESS every crimes he did proudly as if he had an upper hand even though his in point blank of a sword that could detach his head instantly, it's the same habit and same sequence for, Jon Arryn, Varys, Baelish and now doran, they get confronted- they immediately admit all their crimes as if they were wrap in a laso of truth - then they beg for forgiveness and mercy just right after they trash talked the mc like some COD player, it doesn't make may sense.