The amount of grammar errors in this chapter is just painful do a review and look up the correct way cause honestly this was just hard to read. Also those full body tattoos are killing me. I'm done sorry but I just can't.

ok first this is just a mess of a chapter multiple time skips all bottled up in one chapter yeah no this is already sending me bad vibes for the future of the story.

"he flees to one day get revenge on those who wronged him and his family"?

who is Mauls family? and if we're talking about the starks, then why the fuck would maul care about them in the first place?

I can tell this fic is hot garbage without even reading it.

nice

Kind of anticlimactic death of Robert... After all he's done, rapes etc for close to 20 YEARS, his death should have been a much slower one. Maybe on the rack for a bit, giving him a "diet" that made him taller and thinner lol. Or drawn and quartered perhaps, arms and legs torn off between four horses, leaving his torso on the ground lol.

Heh anyone more than me that see somewhat parallels between Cat and Cersei? Both are deranged, only Cat has been better at hiding it... XD

Wylas, not Willis, Garlan, not Garland... XD

Asha? Balon's daughters name is Yara lol.

It was RICKARD and Brandon Stark that was killed by Aerys... Also pretty sure the Tully patriarch is named Hoster, not Holster. Very easy for spell check to make that last mistake, since holster is a proper word lol... XD

Unless you have hereditary diseases in your family or negative alleles in your genome, there is less risk from an incestual relationship than grabbing a stranger from the street to start a family with, as long as it isn't several successive generations. That's actually a fact... After a few generations of continuing inbreeding, a condition called sickle cell anemia may occur, but as far as GoT tells us, the Targaryen incest is interspersed with various marriage to other houses...

what about your naruto x dbs fic?

When I first read the story idea my first thought was: this is a bad idea, I read the first chapter and still thought the same, I read the second and... I still thought the same, I'll stop here. The story isn't disgusting and maybe some people like the idea (I've liked similar things), but this one in particular seems to me just plain nonsense.

Can't wait to see the trial...

Huh, Maul must had used some Force BS to communicate. Or Lynna being a Force Ghost pulled some strings.

And he'd get the tats. Most likely close to Darth Maul's patterns.