great chapter keep it up

one of the best fics in my opinion.
very enjoyable to read.
greetings and thanks for this great history

"You, have me surrounded? Oh no. You are sadly mistaken my naïve and foolish friends. You do not have me surrounded. It's the other way around. You just can't see it. Not until you meet your end," said Maul with a smirk before he was upon his enemy at speed none suspected him to possess for one so young.

Missed opportunity of saying : All I am surrounded by is fear. Fear and dead men."

The ink master and maul bit feels wasted and not needed. Wasted air.

This is just maul in westeros, i dunno why you're bothering with the pretense of this being jon snow since they have zero characteristic of jon snow. You're even making him have mauls tattoo and his weapon.

You seem to have an aversion to describing people’s physical characteristics. Maul got full body tattoos and there has barely been a word about it or even what the rest of him looks like. It’s like this with all of the people in this story. You rely too much on the readers already knowing what people and things are supposed to look like.

Wonderful chapter.

Another amazing story,thank you!

Fitting ending, would have been cool if Maul saw a vision of Palpatine dying and got a form of elation

Nicely done, I hope one day you'll make a new story with Jon marrying a Blackfyre girl, over Daenerys.

Great story as always even if i prefer your stories with harems lol. Still a great one and glad to have read it. look forward to some of your other stories being completed. keep up the good work.

I'm looking forward to the one with sub-zero in the Game of Thrones continuing can't wait bro

Amazing work! Great ending. Please consider doing a house of the dragon fic I beg you. Based on this The changes you would make would be awesome

While I am sad this wonderful story is over, I am excited and glad that I got to read it. Thank you very much for being the author to it.

Lol congratulations and thank you. Try finish
Naruto dragon ball or Naruto yu yu hakuso please

Nicely done congrats on reaching the finish line

Go Lord Stark.