Reviews for The Laughing Slytherin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, Melissa annoying Vernon was absolutely hilarious! My stomach hurts because I laughed so much! That absolutely made my day, thank you! "Oh Universe, you serve me comedy on a platter!" I can't- hahahaha! Why is that so funny Melissa talking in her head to Lucifer was amusing, she was so mad at first Oop- Lucifer really freaked out Lockhart, it was quite amusing to read Melissa being Melissa is always fun to read and her being friends or at least companions with Luc was quite the thing to read I really enjoyed reading this chapter and I am looking forward to the next chapter!:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simple but epic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy heck, thats insane, poor lockheart |
![]() ![]() I got to admit, I was done with this story after chapter 5. Not because I think your story is badly written or illogical for a Harry Potter story. I just can't abide the way the causal crulty of the characters is shrugged off. Snape not caring if someone is hurt, Madam Pince not caring that she destroyed some one elses property, the (probably) twins getting other students hurt in potions class. I'm okay with these events happening but the fact that no body is outraged just makes me not see the characters as people. I know it was typical in Harry Potter but as an adult I just can't reconcile it. Not when the main character can be so scientific and logical about making parallels to Hitler and then goes back to whatever it doesn't matter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg i just found rhis sorry and I absolutely LOVE it! I cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! So excited this is back. Can't wait to read about Melly's experience. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can already see it, Azkaban Inmate Choir, funded and established by Melissa Bennet. XD I can imagine the next few pieces she writes will be Azkaban themed... Would make a fire emo album or at least something post grunge. Can't wait to read more. Excellent work by the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Reading this chapter made my day! I'm always a little bit happier when a chapter from this story comes out:D Looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice view of Harry and the Twins, can't wait to see more |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was wondering where the 2021 part will come in, and it hit me like a train lol. I feel bad for Harry, he feels really bad about what happened meanwhile Melissa is just there, making all the inmates sing meme songs |
![]() ![]() ![]() well... i WAS really into this story, but this occulemency "monster" really just... ruined it for me. great story imo up till this point. but i think im done with it. sorry. youre writing still is really good. and i hope you continue enjohing it |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmao Serpa-geddon has me cackling |