She is planning the most devious stuff, I know it

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Not bad at all

Oh man, she is a riot, in was just thinking about bill and how crazy everything went for her last year. Glad that she is now hailed as an angel lol

Just binged 125 chapters over the course of three days and god did I enjoy the hell out of it. Its always a pleasure to see the fruits of years of labor and its easily a 4.5/5 for me; a definite recommendation to any reader of OC/SI fics. 5/5 for characters and more like 3/5 for the actually story.

Its has never felt as solid as other OC/SI fanfictions in having a predetermined path or trying to follow cannon, but this story shines in the consistent joy and characterization of the OC, Melissa Harmony Bennet. The fic does become harry centric in 1991, but it does come back around. I personally am hoping to see more interactions between Harry and Melissa. After the summer of '93, they have just felt so distant; like I can definitely tell that Melissa loves Harry, but I'm starting to feel like Harry is outgrowing Melissa and getting tired of the whirlwind nature she brings with her. Their relationship and the sheer fun of Melissa is what drew me in, but right now the balance feels off between "the plot", "Harry and Melissa's relationship", and "Harry's Journey"

But absolute props to PhaedraZev for feeling out their story, following through with what made actual sense for the characters they created, and seeing the consequences. Moments like Harry in Hufflepuff or the Bill Cipher Arc feel almost surreal but are delights in that they make absolute sense for the people Harry and Melissa so clearly are in this story.

Thank you for the effort you've put to produce something for the world and which brightens entire days for random humans across time and space, of which I am grateful to have been one.

After reading this i got the strong need to eat chocolate but i can't cause it's like 3am (yeah, i know, not gonna eat choco at night but still stay up late? But tbh i think reading is a better treat for me hehe). Also, RIP Harry getting bombarded with owl mail i can imagine him swimming in all those letters. Also, what would Fawkes sound like if he was speaking like a human, me mentally for some reason, i kinda feel he would sound like Jack Black (might be from all the kung fu panda 4 trailers that been showing up for a long while) Anyways, i enjoyed the chapter and what you come up for VATIC!

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Very well executed

love it but aot 2-4 sucked

Is it based on the cursed child play? I never saw it so i don't know what it is about. But, seeing as Melissa's supposed prophesies tend to be references. Also, Melissa really needs to keep her writing to herself lol, these silly students take everything she says now as a vision, which could be something that can be good for beneficial use but it also can impact her negatively.

theres a typo in the first sentence. if i had to guess it was a formatting error and fanfic didnt like the fractions you put in.

Oh wow, I wonder if she wrote that after or before she knew bellatrix was pregante

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Really love the story! I started reading a long while back and i think it only reached till chapter 40 at the time. Hadn't read because i was focused in my studies but now that i graduated i had plenty of time to read and remembered this story. I was surprised that there were so many chapters updated and in the end i decided to binge read from the very beginning! Not gonna lie i laughed so much and had fun! I look forward to reading more!

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