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Guest chapter 7 . 7/5
But how is this going to work around her shield? I thought no mental gift could penetrate it? And Keiran's gift is clearly mental, isn't it?Or is he physically manipulating the brain?
Guest chapter 6 . 7/5
I'm glad they sorted this out, but I would have liked to see Tanya's reaction to this developement too. I know Edward was nothing more than a challenge to her, but marking him as the one that got away for good has to have some impact. Not a jealous rage or anythimg like that, she didn't have that kind of feelings for Edward or any man for that matter... but I would have liked to see if she can respect Bella and Edward's bond.
I will never understand the big theme in Twilight about staying friends with people who refuse to accept your no. Decent people don't disrespect you that way.
nizzyna chapter 4 . 7/7
Such a sweet chapter, they’re falling in love all over again 3
it's simply me n you chapter 13 . 6/12
Nice ending. I’m glad they both have some human memories to look back on.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/7
Bella is a newborn, right? How comes they take her to town full of humans, into school still full of human scents despite being empty and Bella has no reaction at all to any of this? No bloodlust, no thirst, not even a single thought about scents in general. It's very odd for a species with their main sense being smell...
Guest chapter 1 . 6/7
While I really like Jasper I still find it odd that Edward isn't the one helping her adjust. It feels wrong, like when a baby imprints on their caretaker instead of their absent mom. I can't believe Edward missed out on this chance to bond with Bella...
it's simply me n you chapter 4 . 6/9
It was nice to hear their story from Edwards view
it's simply me n you chapter 3 . 6/9
Gotta be frustrating for Bella. At least she has many people trying to help her
Wannabe Esme chapter 3 . 6/8
I feel for Edward and for Bella. Nice chapter!
Wannabe Esme chapter 1 . 6/8
Great start. I like the interaction between Bella and Jasper. chapter 1 . 6/6
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Wendy chapter 13 . 5/16
Muchas gracias por la historia
traceybuie chapter 13 . 5/15
Awe... That was a sweet, romantic end to your story. Thanks for writing and sharing. I'll be back as a reader for your next vamp or human fic. No shifter pairings for me. ;)
MsLiss chapter 13 . 5/15
Thank you
traceybuie chapter 12 . 5/11
Awe... sweet, romantic chapter... Thanks for writing and sharing.
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