One more thing: there's already a Gabriel, and I thought the main focus was about Alex and his messed up crusade against Touma.

Alex deserves to be beaten to a bloody pulp, and his taste of victory turned absolute sour. By the way, I think it's too unrealistic and unconvincing for him to simply pull off these 'perfect crimes' in Academy City, from knowing Touma's friends and girls who loved him (like Misaki), to hitting his targets with little to no casualties even with his ability? Come on, none of these make any sense.

Why does that guy even hated Touma? He's not even from Japan.

OH BOY THINGS ARE GETTIN HOOOOOT
Alex catches on extremely quickly~

I don't suppose you plan to bring out Touma's dark side in the future so he can torture Alex till he breaks easily? Even one of his dragons' more than enough I should say.

stabbed 15 times? Man, that's a bit much, sadistic murderers...
London burning? EHH? And who's that figure? Looks like the plot is moving along...
This is really good, don't stop! I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Can't wait to see how Mikoto will fit in as well

Wow we have huge hypocrites in our room. Who goes to fancy restaurant that Touma can’t afford. Interesting would Alex poke fun of that.

But yeah Alex maybe hypocrite but lest he shows that he isn’t heartless, he just have vendetta against Touma.

Can't Aleister or Nouken do something about this dirtbag Alex? He deserves to suffer far worse to the point where fear will forever consumes him, not this stupid 'I don't care what happens to me, as long as I take pleasure' garbage. I swear Alex is the dumbest, irritating, nobody that ever exist.

Mmm sabes no estára esto inspirado en red hood? El Robin que cree que Batman es blando y se debe matar

AHHH THIS IS REALLY GOOD! YEEE I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE! Are you sure this is your first fanfic?
Alex seems really... um... murderous...
I really wanna know what happened before Touma's memory loss, seems really interesting!
Will Mikoto play a big part in the plot? (She's kinda my fav character)
Wonder why Shokuhou's being targeted, that's odd
Anyway, this is really good, will be looking forward to the next one chapter!

Looks like Alex would be able to piss off Touma really hard.
But that said since we gotta little glimpse of Alex past. Who exactly is he?
If he person devoted to destroy Kamijou Touma. Then were does really his origins begin.

Glad to see you update. And I have to say, I love Alex, as an enemy. An enemy completely devoted to destroying the hero. I love it.

So its like the Sins of Ones Actions scenario

Eternal suffering. Oh boi, they gonna pull a rezero soon. Great woek!

Ok Alex really thinks that making Touma suffer is good idea ok he is dead .
Because our boy eats suffering for break fast .
Hmm does dragon shell gonna appear in your story .