i want moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Man, for a few chapters badkcthere I was afraid I was gonna have to drop this fanfic. Hot dayum it picked up, and it picked up good. Not cuz of the adult stuff, just the plot in general. This is good, let's hope you didn't mess up the next chapters just cuz they are gonna be action.

Man, this picked up goodddd. You gotta stick more to the interpersonal interactions man. You are inhumanly good at them. The action heavy sequences leave a bit more to be desired, they lack a clarity. But the conversations are️

please continue the story, it's so good

Your storr is very good I hope you continue to write it

Your story is very cool.

I dunno what is going on. There something I absolutely love about this, there is something I don't like too. And I just ca t tell which is which

Firstly, I have no recollection of rich. Was he in the Kane series? I srsly don't remember him. Secondly, this chapter fell off. I didn't feel like I was dying if I wasn't reading. It felt fine to leave it. UNACCEPTABLE, it should be like the rest, like I need it like water. On a serious note, this felt less intuitive and more of you just training in the meadow, leaving your readers in the cave.

Thank you for fast updateHappy Good Friday

Please tell me the piper stuff had some importance to the plot. It's seriously messed up if you did it just to get percy to visit her.

I am not happy about percy winning, but losing, but hey that's just me being immature. This is what a story is supposed to be. And you, sir, are very much making this a fully fledged story. Kudos to you

Oh my f****** god. If this was not your magnum opus, I would be worried. I literally can't see something better than this. World building could definetly be better, if only slightly, the surroundings are still kinda murky, but the vivid fight scenes more than make up for it. W chapter bro

soo gooooooddd. Don't let it bloat your ego, but even if it does, can't blame you. This is some masterful and exciting shihh.

Ahhhhhhh, this shihh goood. Man, it's been a while (not really) since I came across something so goddamn good. Can't stay for the review, got more to read

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. W fight scene bro. I have not felt this rush ever since I read 'of water and salt' i'd say both are equally well written, but this one conveys more emotion and action, perfect for a dude about to write his jee advanced.