Great chapter!

Enochian of all faiths that was something I did not see coming. Totally wondering if the emerald tablet will be coming into play.

Amazing chapter.
Can't wait for the next update!
I hope you will finish this story and won't abandon it like soooo many other Pertemis stories :)

Wonderful chapter. Although if I had to put something negative, I would say that Artemis' absence is quite noticeable in the last arc of the story, not only in terms of appearance, But also in mentions of her from any character. Sure, it's perfectly normal to look for Percy's separate development as a character, but it's hard to find the "pertemis" in the last arc. At least some slight mention of its existence would be wonderful. Or if not, I would appreciate that in next arcs Artemis as a character had more weight in the story. Likewise, wonderful work of fiction. Thanks for the good work.

Jesus, that was a really cool chapter, the percabeth was still cute, though I hope they can still be close friends in the future!

Holy wow… i just binged this story and Im HOOKED.
I mean, i read it before but you had only gotten to chapter 27 or something, then i come back to 8 more GLORIOUS chapters! Pls keep em coming, your writing style and character development is addicting. Can’t believe you killed off tyson though. I mean i saw it coming and i know he can come back but still… that hurt. Anyways! Much love and keep it up!

Amazing can't wait for the next chapter

And just like that, it's over. I devoured the whole thing in no time. Now the waiting game begins!

Awesome chapter. I hope the story never gets abandoned lol. This plot is so unique. Looking forward to the next update!

bro kill the fucktard omg his is disgusting that he would even thing about apologizing

Loved it. had some issues, mainly with a few small moments that seemed ooc to me as you tried to heavy handedly build up to what I can see you building up to (gotta have percabeth have maximum awkwardness but also maximum chemistry I get it, but damn, he’s a fucking kid and she’s not as much as they have other factors working in their favor. I honestly think the whole “me” while looking her in the eye talking about trust, and annabeth even giving the time of DAY level of legitimacy and patience to someone who has kids with her and a marriage of 10 years but is afraid of her getting stolen by a 17-18 year old is not rly something they would/should do. Laying it on a little thick here to sow the seeds of the drama lol haha. Also think Percy would never be sith-lord style threatening murder over some words like that , he’s too good of a guy at the core of the character.

BUT

BUT BUT BUT

There’s a lot more here that you’re doing right and that I love. The emotional conflict and tension is definitely very tasty and honestly super realistic for a situation that is as depressing and sad as it highkey is on both sides. Your prose and imagery are excellent as always (although I’d say a bit lacking expounding on how Aannabeth has changed as a 35 year old, I’ve kinda had to fill in the gaps with how she looks and sounds in my mental picture because there’s no way she would be the same and be worth just calling “Annabeth” on first mention in Percy’s thoughts considering the guy examined how new Rome looked even though he’s seen that before too.

I’m spending way too much time here talking about the critical nit picks though. As you may recall this is what I hoped to you would be an excellent direction to go with the story so I’m loving every bit of it and can’t wait for more. Absolutely stunning work overall filling out the details from scenery, background characters, the vibe of Percy’s growing power / fading connection to mortality, world building, love it love it love. Can’t wait for the drama to come

Where is the next chapter as I'm addicted to this story

man this chapter things, but I’m excited to see how you’ll write percy’s new love interest. it’s gonna be difficult to top percabeth, but I think you’ll be able to pull it off

This is the first PJ fanfiction I've read that goes so deep into the characters' emotions. I can feel everything so strongly. Some tears just couldn't be held back

Oh myyy .. I love your summer holiday.. I get 3 chapters in 1 month!

I am waiting the time when Percy found love in his moon .. how can they happen