Reviews for The Rising Dawn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() im feeling major character death soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly one of my Percy Jackson fics ever. Writing quality is great and the subtle jokes and references are awesome. Thanks for the story and can’t wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Havent read them yet, but im so excited i have been waiting since i binge read it, and now 2 updates in 2 hours?! This is great |
![]() ![]() ![]() Should’ve killed them |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, I'm Ella courtney ! I just finished reading your story, and I have to say it's absolutely captivating! Your storytelling is immersive, the characters feel so real, and the plot had me hooked from start to finish. I’d love to share a detailed review because your work deserves all the praise! Keep writing your talent is truly something special. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your storytelling is amazing! You create interesting worlds, well-developed characters, and engaging plots that keep readers invested. Each story has its own charm and is a joy to read. I think your story would work great as a comic bringing the action, emotions, and atmosphere to life through artwork. Important moments could be illustrated with dynamic panels and expressive characters. If you're interested, I'd love to collaborate and turn your story into a visual experience If you like my idea let's connect on discord: aholmes2373 thank you.0.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit, you did an amazing job writing that scene (you know which one I’m talking about) though I’m curious how much of it was due to the lust demon and how much was from Annabeth. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Blimey. I was expecting P&A to have it out with each other but to take it that far... Looking forward to seeing where you rake this from here. Seems there's a fair amount of negativity over this, fair to a degree, but I'm sure you've got plans so good luck to ya. I always look forward to these updates. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I realy like this story, but I dislike the entire interaction bettwen Percy and Annabeth in this chapter because it just means that teddy was right to worry about them and that Annabeth is a cheater who prefer to be with her ex that is 20 years younger then her and to completely throw away the family she built over the last twenty years. I know that in the end Percy will end up with Artemis but I just don't think that Artemis will be interested in someone who flirt/kiss every woman he talks to (just as Scarlett said). |
![]() ![]() no worries man, keep up the good work, I just want you to know, I really do enjoy your stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() Так это про Персабет история или про Персимиду, черт возьми? |
![]() ![]() I like all ship, i like percabeth, i like pertemis. Anyway, out of any version of percy and annabeth that need to fuck, ur version of percy and annabeth need to fuck the most |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im dipping out here this story hasnt been enjoyable to me for a good amount of chapters and I dont have any hope for its future |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm confused. Has there been an update past chapter 40? The story keeps getting updated, but this is the same chapter I already read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Here I am.. I am laying in hospital and reading your newest update loll I cant wait next one when artemis appear.. how they will interact and what will happen |