Last time you made my day when I was hospitalized.. now you made my day happier when I am on Holiday

Thanks for update (double updates)
PsI hope the whole percabeth gonna be end soon _ I cant imagine Anabeth nor Percy cheating or having any other improper thought

I hope Zeus is watching this shit go down, maybe them he will start helping in some way instead of being on negation.

" you watching this one Zeus? Hum? Still think there is no mortal danger coming for your ass? Start preparing for war you ***hole!"

Seeing some reviews talking about how Annabeth is OOC. I feel like shes not really acting weird. Her first love, who just randomly diappeared for 20 years is back. First flame never goes away. She knows her mother set her up with her current husband and i can see how that would change her outlook on it. I also understand why you would think shes OOC but its not the stretch some are making it to be. Two i read said they are dropping the fic because of it? Wild lmao

Yeah dropping it here i just cant believe you ruined one of my favorite stories on this site. It was interesting and good while it lasted.

I was thrilled at the double chapter. Im excited to see how an olympian can compare to an Annunaki. Hopefully percy can dish out an ass whooping for the harm done to Annabeth! Great chapter as always.

I hope this doesn’t come off as like flame or hate but this is where I’m dropping the story

This story was definitely one of the best PJO stories I’ve read in the last few years but I just am not enjoying the direction this story is taking anymore. The whole messy romance drama happening right now is just not my cup of tea.

Annabeth just straight up deciding to abandon a whole family she’s created over the last 20 years is crazy. Doubling down in ch. 41 after Percy brings it up is even more absurd. Age gap is a thing too but I guess if she’s acting like this then no actual maturity occurred over the last 20 years for her? Also objectively, “we’ll get to that bridge when we get to it” by Annabeth is a crazy line considering who she is lol. I get she’s mad at her mom but man like what about her kids, not even thinking about them? Poor kids :( Unironically only remedy I see to this is Annabeth perishes soon. I don’t think anyone would even take her side here, like Piper/Frank/Hazel/Leo when he shows up assuming they notice the two are somewhat together again.

Also I have no clue how you’re gonna fit Artemis at this point into this pairing because I know Percy pushed back but being complicit in cheating would just reinforce male hating stereotypes for her no? (Although obviously it takes two to tango and assuming Artemis knows too)

I do find it kind of ironic you mentioned you didn’t like how Pertemis stories handle Annabeth since she is “OOC and cheats or dies.” Then you decided to handle it by still making her cheat? Like I know it’s with Percy but it still expresses that the character itself is a terrible person, which is why those stories end up bashing her I guess. In this case you have her cheating on her husband with Percy which I can kinda get the logic? In that the two were inseparable, went through so much, and were loyal to each other; but it’s been 20 years, she has a different life with family and kids, and they’re still cheating and they both know it, which in turn makes both feel OOC and morally terrible characters. That shift just doesn’t sit right with me.

This was still a really innovative story, I don’t think I’ve ever actually read any FF involving the Annunaki before so it was cool learning about them. The actual plot was definitely interesting and I liked how you were showcasing them. Just unfortunately I’ve never been a fan of romance drama.

Nah so true Percy is aura farming like crazy lol I love it!
And finally Artemis returns, love how you write her character and I can’t wait to see how this arc finishes.

Great chapter, cant wait for the next, love the new tech and i cant wait to see what happens next

Loved it, plus am hungry.

im feeling major character death soon

Honestly one of my Percy Jackson fics ever. Writing quality is great and the subtle jokes and references are awesome. Thanks for the story and can’t wait for more

Havent read them yet, but im so excited i have been waiting since i binge read it, and now 2 updates in 2 hours?! This is great

Should’ve killed them

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