This fiction was so beautiful. I loved the way it all came together in the end. Norah's reactions were very realistic too. It is scary to associate with mercenaries. I liked the focus on healing too. Thank you for this master piece.

The moment between Gunnar and Norah was so touching and beautiful. I loved it.

this entire chapter just took YEARS off of my life omg. so much is happening D:

no way! I'm crying sm right now, I can't explain how much I love this story

The moment between Norah and her family was so tender and touching. I really felt like I was there and experiencing it with them. A very good chapter, can't wait for more :)

oh MAN i was right about Mike! /Ben! You really threw me off for a minute there. I really enjoyed this chapter and I'm excited to see how the rest of the emotions unravel as the story nears its end.

omg. the ending of that gave me chills. toll saying "promise me we get her back, lee" made some tears prick in my eyes. and poor mike! I thought maybe he'd be the bad guy somehow. waiting anxiously for the next update!

what a chapter omg. I'm assuming Lee's past is catching up... and this is just the quiet before the storm. And mike? an interesting development. I like that this story isn't focused on Norah and Lee pining solely for each other the entire time (though i will admit that I enjoy Lee's pining lol). I wonder if Lee will find her on the couch all banged up when he gets home.

some great writing in this chapter! im incredibly frustrated with Lee lol, and i feel bad for Toll to get in the middle of it. I think he deserves somebody that feels about him the way Norah does with Lee.

Really loved this chapter- i sense some major developments happening :) I really feel for Norah and how she feels about her mothers death and now her fathers illness. It's a very interesting thing to try and unpack. Excited to see how it goes.

Oh no. Very worried for Norah. I'm excited to see how it plays out and I hope everyone is okay.

so many thingssss ahhhhh. The part with all the uncles made me smile like an idiot. so cute. I'm so glad she's okay. I wish Lee wasn't so dumb, but he wouldn't be Lee if he was smart at all.

my chest is so tight from this chapter. poor norah, poor sasha... ahhhhh

such an excellent chapter. i love the dynamics so much.

I don't want to spoil anyone but gosh this is soo sad. Can't wait to see what's going to happen next.