nice

Excellent chapter

oh hey man. thought you were dead. good to here from you again

i mean he could have looked for a food bank or a homeless shelter

Woohoo! Alright let's... Wait... Popstep becomes a queen bee?
NO NO NOOO!

Hey! So glad to have another chapter. Read it as soon as I saw that it was up. Hope you’re able to complete it one day.

Thanks for update glad your felling better

Thanks for the great chapter

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chap!.

...are the heroes really that naive that they can't comprehend the idea that a villain was too dangerous to not put down? I find it bizarre how much effort they put into Smiley instead of, you know, the whole trigger thing.

And the ultra instinct.

Give mc the satsui no hado.

The mc is a bad walking stereotype man. I see where you’re trying to go, making him all angry at the world and heroes and justified-but where’s the justification? He’s just a fool lashing out on others for no reason, all this time he’s homeless and yet where does this story even go? It just seems like a masochist fic to me, where you try to make everything suck for the mc, except there’s no character growth at all. Do the oc’s even matter as well? What purpose do they serve other than blank word count? I’m not sure what edgy character you were trying to make, but it definitely came out worse than what you thought in your head lol, it’s like Eren from AOT except he never grows at all. 6/10, had a decent concept but just made no sense to make him emo like a teenager sasuke, grammar is good too, but that’s about it.

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