Can’t put this series down. Thank you so much for writing it !

I love your Rachel Snow series! I just found it some weeks go and couldn't stop readingRachel is so cute and Sev is such a good guardian! Can't wait to find out what will happen in year 4!

It continues to be a very good story, and eggs me on to the next part.

Another amazing book! I can’t wait for the next one!

Good end for a good story, Rachel was upset about what Severus did not fully understanding it and her feelings and Severus only wanted to help not realizeing that it may hurt her still to talk about it or being confronted by what he had done and what it means for her in the end but Torey had helped them both in that regard and all is well again. Neville got his Patronus Hermione feels that the rules regarding not using magic outside of school are annoying especially for muggleborns who may struggle with their practicals. Good work. *cookies for inspiration and the great work*

Good ending. Keep smiling. :-)

Good chapter all ended well and Rachel is safe in Hogwarts Sirius gets his trial how fair it would be we will find out and Severus keeps his temper he only wants Rachel to see every aspect and what she could have done better in that situation. More please *cookies for inspiration and the great work*

Brilliant thank you for the update. Snape delt with it all very well. But I think he and Rachel need time together to rest and enjoy one another's company. As for Sirius interested to see how he and Snape will interact and whether Rachel trusts him.

Severus won't get Rachel a pet, but Sirius will.

this battle between the dad's is going to be EPIC!

Oh man what a night for everyone but at least Severus knows the truth and they have Peter in custody Rachel is relatively safe with Sirius but Severus still is worried about her and Sirius mental health after all these years in Azkaban but he probably used his animagus Form to keep them at bay for short periods of time. And Theo has a shark patronus wonder what his happy memories are for it. Good work more please *cookies for inspiration and the great work*

I am loving the changes in this story compared to the series. I'm wondering what sort of trouble Sirius will cause about Rachel's guardianship.

Thank you for the new chapter. Definitely an emotional rollercoaster for Rachel. She will be exhausted when things sorted out. It will be interesting to see Sirius and Severus talk, and whether Rachel needs to lay down the law on civility.

Amazing as always

A good chapter she finally did it and have a corporal patronus, The police department had found valuable evidence against these people but they sadly can't catch everyone or enough making Severus feel that he failed Rachel still but he at least did something and helped other children in the progress. Rachel still isn't so sure about what she feels when it comes to her past and the nightmares but Torey helps her to understand and what might help people who had traumas and what they can do against them. I really like your story's they show us both sides the good and the bad and that it isn't good to keep everything in. In Harry Potter it's like all his bad experiences with his relatives didn't matter or that he doesn't have any mental or emotional (that we have clearly seen more in 6 year with his anger and resentment even towards his friends) problems and I'm not so sure if even Ginny got any help after that diary Debakel at all. More please *cookies for inspiration and the great work*

Brilliant new chapter. Fascinating insight into post-traumatic stress and how psychologists can help children. Lovely potronus so sweet. What would happen if Severus and Rachel cast them together? Will they play or ignore eachother? Thank you for the update