A good chapter very interesting and Lupin gives a good reason too with the bogart and how he met her father, I wonder if he had told Dumbledore about Sirius being an animagus jet in the book and movie he didn't tell him. More please *cookies for inspiration and the great work*

Good chapter, at least Draco isn't such a prat but he still didn't take Hagrid seriously and Rachel got hurt because of it. Severus is not happy about it and will have some words with him for sure maybe he should scare him with his own words like your father will hear of it if you don't behave he would if course not go trough with it but it will help hopefully. Good work more please *cookies for inspiration and the great work*

“ It could only get better from here though, right?”

Famous last words, Rachel. Famous. Last. Words. Hopefully this means Buckbeak won’t be executed. Any who, nice chapter sweetie, and I look forward to the next one *smiley face*

Good chapter very interesting with some knowledge on Arithmany(I would not choose it, it is to much like math and I sucked at it in school) her friends are worried about what truly happend she lied a bit to worry them not to much about her past and why the Dementors had such an effect on her. More please *cupcakes for inspiration and the great work*

Good story interesting and a way better beginning then the original, Rachel knows who Sirius is and what he had done or at least everyone believes he had done even Dumbledore didnvt know that they had switched the secret keeper at least it sounds like that and he seems truly worried for her, the two-way books are great and the friends are getting closer and into a tight unit let's hope Theo doesn't get punished and that he can get out before his father demands for him to swear loyalty to the dark lord. Severus maybe should begin to work on a potion that can destroy the mark on his arm and of course help others out of it to in a suptle way without them knowing it is him. I enjoy it already really good work more please *cookies for inspiration and the great work*

Just read all three of you stories today, they’re amazing! I can’t wait for the rest of this story! Thank you!