i have never expected a crossover between naruto and LOR is this good. i love this. amazing story, amazing introduction, amazing details

August 1st 2023 check in! this story is really good, read it and give it a follow, it's also worth a download if you have the app

Wow. This was such a beautiful story. The parallels between Sakura and Glorfindel are ingenious and tragic to the point of tears, while Sakura's character growth is like a bud blossoming into a radiant flower. The world building is exquisite.

if I was her, that spider would have freaked me out too

This is pretty good please update soon

This fic was much, much better than the description implied.

Only criticism is the strange use of those/that/there people/land/etc. Would sound much less strange to use "here" imo. it's the place she's been living in for years, should be here not there.

Wonderful story so far Thankyou

Oh My God!
You are back!
Thank you so very much for this update!
I've read this story twice already with no expectations to ever be updated, but here you are! Perfectly making me go back with my silly thoughts!
Thank you so much!
I loved this chapter! And I bet, I will also love the next ones to come as well!
Hopefully to see another combo update like this one here as well in not so far future, pls!
Many thanks from a devoted fan!

It’s spiders is it not?

Lovely update!

This is a wonderful story. Its not locked in the exact frame that almost all lotr stories are. Having the story happen way earlier gives a lot freedom and makes future happenings unknown. This is not another walk to the mountain. I hope you keep updating.

Hidden gem

holy shit
1st, the writing is gorgeous. Smooth with no grammar mistakes and written in such a way that breathes life into the lord of the rings setting. the characters and their emotions you emphasize is also a unique twist. I've never read a story that focused on the aspect of shinobi use of hiding their emotions and being able to sense others'. Really neat idea.
Since the lord of the rings isn't my fandom, i'm afraid i'm not much use in understanding what is your creativity vs Tolkien's, but i do hope to make a point of how much I love the details of the not-blood-but-is-blood thing and her dream-that-isn't-really-a-dream-visits. It was so cool!
Another thing I really liked (oddly enough) was the changes in the Naruto plotline. Sakura having the mokuton just connects so well into this story that I'm not even mad. In fact, I think it was quite brilliant to connect those dots. And her being forced to leave the Elemental Nations (and watching the ending of the war happen) really gave some major feelings for you to play around with.
The differences between the two worlds and her struggle with her grief, bitterness, and general life really gave her character depth. She constantly doubts herself both from past experiences from cannon and your own story and I think you just really did her justice. She reacts to things and is slow in trusting, bitter and dealing with assh*les but not afraid to own up to things. What I'm trying to say is that you have brought her character to life. She's flawed. and I'm living for it.
Glorfindel and Sakura's relationship is so fascinating to me. Even though you haven't written the story from his point of view, the way you write hers and let things go right over her head somehow shows just how badly they're communicating. Like, they're trying. Sort of. But she's completely misunderstanding his feelings sometimes and I just- UGH. They don't fit together right away. It's a struggle. And it makes the story twice as interesting.
i hope im getting across how awesome this story is. It sucked me in and there are only 9 chapters so far. How is it so good!? You have blown my mind.
Thank you for writing this fanfic. It has been an honor to read, and I can't wait for more!

Continue please

I did expect this but please continue I need more to fill my curiosity