Reviews for Ben 10: Hero Force
Phantomgreninja12 chapter 13 . 1/3
tenth form wht is this demon slayer
Phantomgreninja12 chapter 11 . 1/3
at first i thought u were talking about alien x but then u said tht i changes his actual personality so i thought ghost freak but then it said sume about not having to touch person to inflict damage and the form also creeps put ben so ur obviously talking about toepick right
Phantomgreninja12 chapter 11 . 1/3
several of bens aliens can beat asui in wter but to name his top one aka amphibian or is it ampfibian then theres ripjaws and xlr8 can litterally run on water sooooooooooooooooo
Phantomgreninja12 chapter 7 . 1/3
I didn't know momo was Bruce Wayne
Phantomgreninja12 chapter 8 . 1/3
not launchpad from DuckTales
Phantomgreninja12 chapter 8 . 1/3
shoulda used jetray instead of cannonbolt on the 50meter dash since jetray is like his fastest flyer
Phantomgreninja12 chapter 6 . 1/3
bro when pony said the word flamboyantly I automatically thought back to demon slayer
Phantomgreninja12 chapter 2 . 1/2
correction mustafu is spelled what the 3u's (musutafu)
Death Fury chapter 14 . 12/31/2021
Excellent chapter
OdeClock chapter 14 . 12/27/2021
That Midoriya dream sequence was one of the best parts of this chapter! It shows that it will be very difficult to alien mind control Izuku, and possibly even magically mind control Izuku (i.e. Charmcaster). This puts him as an incredible asset for Ben later on down the line. He already is, but that bit of knowledge shows that when the chips are down, he can rely on Midoriya to have his back.

I definitely understand creative blocks, and you and your editor should take the time you need to get back in the zone for writing this very cool story.

Would enjoy a little bit more expansion on his relationships with ones outside of Class 1-A, once the hiatus is over too.
CCSakuraforever chapter 14 . 12/26/2021
Esta muy bueno el capítulo que paso con ben contra el nomu como fue la pelea que paso ahí mas como ayudo a los que tenian problema con el tema de los calamares y que pasará después del ataque del USJ
ppsspp chapter 14 . 12/26/2021
Ben x momo
CRUDEN chapter 14 . 12/25/2021
Happy holidays thanks for the chapter
vinayakdj1 chapter 14 . 12/25/2021
Ben is being a lot pessimistic...it's not his fault the plumbers are shit at their job...not only is the situation worse since his hiatus, but now even past rosters exiled to the null void are escaping...

Also shouldn't he have collected atleast 1 of the squids for grandpa max? Also Roja will need to be handed over to the plumbers...wonder how he will do it without blowing his cover...oh well...guess the plumbers will have access to dialogue option with all the national leaders of earth...
But if I understand correctly, this fanfic is seriously creating plot holes considering all other Ben 10 series'... Wonder how will Ben look into the invasion...follow timeline of both franchises...study...make frnds...time travel with doc time...butt heads with Kevin...space adventures...etc etc while being emo
The One Beyond You chapter 14 . 12/24/2021
Let me guess, the Police force and Tsukauchi have been infiltrated and replaced by DNAlien impostors. You gave hints of it with Tsukauchi forgetting about All Might's injury and the Xenocites being contained in Green slimes by the Cops.

Also, I don't like how you made NRG into a power hungry maniac like Pandor. Ben never had that problem while using Albedo's incomplete Ultimatrix which had less safety features than Azmuth's prototype Omnitrix. Seems like a made up reason to make Ben use NRG less. Even though him constantly emitting lethal dose of Radiation should be enough reason.
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