Took almost 20 chapters to have Harry really start doing anything. The story and control seem to do more with these other characters Alex and Alisha or however her name is spelled. Its a really slow story. I doubt the author is readding these reviews as they have reviews turned off in A03.

Now as far as the Draco thing is concerned instead of benevolent overlord Harry giving Draco the title to troll people who think this is stupid or just a bad story idea you could have just had Draco inherit the Black family anyway and moved along. The was no reason to have Harry do this outside of seeming morally superior.

Also I don't really understand this line
"a family that fought for the side of Light in every great war of the last 200 years… a family that has always been resoundingly Grey... has come home.”"

How can a family that has been resoundingly Grey fight for the light for in ever war for 200 years? Aren't you just light then? Or does dark just mean evil which would still just make you light

Just found this story, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you for writting it.

Harry understands that Draco is better than him. And that Harry must suck Draco's cock like a good loser. Author agrees.

Never understood letting bullies win by punishing your fans. I was enjoying the story and now I'm being punished for something I didn't do.

Well, shit. I was really enjoying this story. Sorry you had to put up with any abuse, let alone such uncalled for. Hope wherever you are now, whatever you're doing, you're well.
Thanks for the story. :)

Well sad to see this stopped, though it was getting a little much, too much X-over too soon

couldnt they, like, leave the country, would make it easier to keep harry, the british ministry isnt really looked upon favourably in other countries.

please dont let fawks and harry bond, thats just done so often that its gotten annoying. like the ff so far, hope harry will kill in the future, he probably will fight in at least 1 war after all.

at the beginning i was worried tehy would find harry at godrics hollow, that would have been a major plothole cause how would the wizards have been able to know that voldemort was dead and party if harry wasnt evne found yet, luckily that didnt happen. Dumbledore 'going dark', how i hate such phraces, dark magic is just more offensive orientated magic, hope there wont be 'actual' 'dark magic' in this ff and 'going dark' is used here as a bad synonym for 'evil'(which actually doesn really exist since everything is subjective, except great pain maybe)

Sorry to see such an awesome fic come to an end hate when other people are Rude just because they don't like something. They can just as easily stop reading it when they attack it cause it to come to an end for those of us who were enjoying.

Really enjoying this fiction so far it is a lot of fun to read so full of so many fun interesting twist.

This was such a good chapter love who he got to meet.

That cloak and Ring they have an off feeling to them Wonder when Harry and the others will find out abut them.

That ring makes me think it's no good and knowing Harry's luck it will cause some trouble at some point.

Interesting to see how the view mages this dose add an interesting twist.