Reviews for A Time Traveler's Odyssey
Tigracho chapter 4 . 5/17/2021
Oh wow. Well it makes sense that if Adam fough a stronger version of rita and was able to hold his own, he would have a bigger advantage with present Rita. By the way how old is Adam? Cool fic noneless.
Tigracho chapter 3 . 5/17/2021
Aw, Adam befriending little Sora. If he somehow prevents the Honkai eruption on Nagazora, Sora might not meet Raven.
And, Damn, Schickal will be aware of his existance now.
Tigracho chapter 2 . 5/17/2021
Oh, I didn't there were two versions about how Kiana and Mei met
Tigracho chapter 1 . 5/17/2021
Grovee~
Adam got sent to the past. The ramifications are. . .numerous
The King of Plot Bunnies chapter 4 . 5/16/2021
I won't be seduced. I will die with Kiana/Adam/Mei as the OT3.
AbleGem chapter 4 . 5/16/2021
my ship has set sail. also im liking the story very much.
Phantom System chapter 4 . 5/16/2021
Slowly but surely. Adam is unintentionally building his harem.
channelra3 chapter 4 . 5/16/2021
So last time i mentioned the only problem left is the execution. Well now that problem is thrown right outta the window.

Not only did you laid out clearly PROmetheus' ambitions and motivations, you also extended his connections with other characters such as Rita right here, showing how he can actually beat her and not just plot armor. But damn you also seek to go further with the side characters like Tesla&Einstein and give them the spotlight too. And hot damn that fight scene, as a believer in Rita Supremacy(and a self-proclaimed veteran fic reader), i approve. Not that many people can describe a fight scene like that while also staying true to the character style(artistic), most would just describe their moves in-games and be done with it

Altho despite all of that, you messed up just a tiny bit, Durandal won't get flustered from teases that easily, she'll be way more calm
Hei.Draken chapter 4 . 5/15/2021
Thanks for the chapter, it was really good
Genmu chapter 4 . 5/15/2021
Adam "Prometheus" the Chad, stealing hearts left and right like a master phantom thief. I can see that he has the "Eroge Harem Protagonist" skill, at what rank I'm not sure but it is there.

Good chapter once again, the fight scene, interactions and characters are a joy to read. Hope you keep up the good work.

P.s:
I'm on the Rita and Durandal with Adam ship bois, ya cant change my mind on this one! YEEHAW BOIS!
flitterflux chapter 4 . 5/15/2021
Wow, you're bringing in every character early. That's cool, but be careful not to overextend. Tesla/Einstein being involved early makes sense, and Rita/Durandal was funny, but you don't want to be like an actual gacha game story and shoehorn in everybody at once.
TypeMoonSlave chapter 4 . 5/15/2021
Ah, it was so lovely to read, Rita is also one of my favourite character on Honkai Impact. Your Rita characterization is very on point, though I must say while I loved the interaction between Durandal and Rita in this chapter and I can see it happening in canon, I imagine Durandal would not be that easy to tease and more calm exasperated like to be honest. The combat scene was very well written too, it's a bit unique so it took a bit time to understand it completely, but i feel yours are very easy to read once you get used to it. Still, I like this chapter very much! Looking forward to see Adam unknowingly stole more hearts left and right lmao.

-EULAETERNALSIMP
BorderLand chapter 4 . 5/15/2021
Only chapter 4 and he already gave the middle finger to the plot and stole the heart of a fair maiden, Adam is not playing around that's for sure. I can see him forming a new faction whose purpose is actually saving the world without letting most of it die.

I am eager to see how the story will progress from here now that the chance of Mei awakening as a Herrecher dropped drastically. She still has a core and could awaken as a herrescher but maybe she will do it on her own terms when she needs the power to protect somone.
HaMCRI chapter 4 . 5/15/2021
My friend, you can write fight scenes pretty good. I can't wait for more.
crysis11 chapter 4 . 5/15/2021
good episode, I see that you are giving prominence to the secondary characters, if you are interested in exploring further the story of Tesla and Einstein there is a visual novel about AE that you can find translated there on the HI3 reddit, this VN shows the relationship of Tesla and Einstein with the first herrscher, the herrscher of reason, well introduces other famous scientists who could be much better used, since they were valkyries, it is a pity that many characters with a lot of potential are not used in the original game, you only get to know them better after reading the HI3 comics that can be found translated on the official HI3 website, but I believe that the new HI3 arc will introduce us to the first herrscher since Bronia is starting to interact with the nucleus of the herrscher of of reason and is having dreams about this herrscher.
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