excellent chapter...thx x all

Darn only 4 chapters in and Adam is already stealing hearts!

Rita teasing Durandal is hilarious. Thanks for the chapter and i’m looking forward the next one:)

Well, this was a fun read, now I wonder how many others are gonna fall head over heals with "Prometheus"?

Though Kevin and Durandal and possibly Fu Hua are gonna be a tough time. Tougher still if Fu Hua or Otto use FengHuang Down on him. Any ideas on how that is gonna go down?

Rita being younger means that Adam might be available. Ah damn so many Valkyries and just one dude! Harem or at least 3 or 4 girls. That I would accept.

GODDAMN CLIFFHANGERS MAN-

Love the story though.

Give adam some love for the later chapters . Can you make a multi pairing at least give adam a unique relationshiptowards mei and kiana pls.

Its either a win or getting Ara Ara’d. I’d take either

thank you for the update! can't wait for the battle next chapt!

Very noice chapter, I like what you got going on with Adam, Kiana, and Mei. That's a fun trio right there, good on you for bringing in Kiana early cuz her energetic attitude is great.

Mei is super jelly

I hope Adam beats down Rita lol. At this point in the story, she’s kinda dislikable so him putting her in her place ought to be fun to read.

Well that was surprising, I didnt know Rita and Cocolia are both working together.

BTW I hope he wins, or at least greatly throws her off long enough to escape. I would certainly think that if he escapes, Rita might report this to people who could get him to talk or at least use something like FengHuang Down, like Fu Hua.

Looking forward to the next chapter:)

I can see the potentials of this plot, the writing is also fine, character development(for now, especially Adam) is awesome and the only thing left to make this work great will the the execution

now would you ask me when Kiana met Mei? I wouldn't mind much about these details, after all the HI3 flashbacks of the game show us that it was before she met Bronia and Mei was not a herrscher when the 3rd impact occurred, this makes it clear that the thing was architected by Cocolia, only we saw Mei becoming a herrscher for the first time after Kiana was injured by an Honkai, although we see Mei confronting an armed Kiana and almost falling off a building there is not much context about him becoming completely a herrscher at that moment, at best of the hypotheses she used the powers of a herrscher temporarily due to interaction with the box that may have caused it to release honkai energy from the herrscher nucleus.