Reviews for A Time Traveler's Odyssey |
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![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, i had expected not to see Sora again because Raven took Sora in her wings and we'll be meeting her later down the line, but this too is good. But oh boy the next chapter's gonna be fire, cant wait to see how Welt(and Theresa) react to seeing Adam in person. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the update! Just what I'm looking for my day to be a bit better! As always love the part where they recruit Adam and the interactions of the characters too! Looking forward again to the next chap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see you updating again, absolutely loved the first 5 chapters and I love these 2 new one's as well! Only thing I'd point out is that some sentences are missingin them. Can't wait for the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. It looks like Adam is attracting attention from all kinds of organizations. From Schicksal, Anti-Entropy and World Serpent, starting to wonder which one he's going to join or if he's going to remain independent. Anyway, keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *WS |
![]() ![]() ![]() so it's gonna be 'defend the beacon' challenge huh... looks like Sora's safe and sound and adam is being scouted by raven to join WR. never like the group but they have their benefits for adam like the Elysian realm. also I don't know if you forgot or I'm just dumb but, from your past chapter you explain that people knows about the existence of Valkyrie. So how come mei didn't know of the honkai? is there something I'm missing here? anyways thanks for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The upcoming battle is going to be quite the ordeal, isn't it? Didn't expect to see Raven, honestly, and much less for her to offer Adam an invitation to join WS. I wonder how Adam's cover and Sakura's presence are going to play once the group is brought to St. Freya. Hope to see another chapter soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh hell no, the World Serpent got their eyes on Adam now, that’s not good. Anyway, time to make a last stand and waiting for the Hyperion! And I kinda agreed with the review below me about Adam’s Ultimate Attack, that attack cut through time and space! How’s it no badass!? I wanna see it! Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() May I have a request? Can you make Adam use his ultimate attack, Ichigeki Hissatsu (The attack that use 100 SP in APHO)? I want to see their reaction about how strong Adam is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, so Raven wasn't following orders or the orders came after the Impact. Sly girl, though considering Grey Serpent, he would've thought dunking young girls in a vat of concentrated honkai would be a fun way to pass the time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now this is a rare one. This is probably the first APHO Adam Honkai fanfiction I've seen so far. This has a lot of potential and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A surprise for sure... But a welcome one I half expected this chapter's note to be something along the line of "i ran out of ideas, sorry guys". But instead you my man, has so many ideas that its difficult to choose. I dont think i woulda spend time rewriting 3 different versions of one chapter, respect go to you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ha rem! pairings!ha rem! pairings!ha rem! pairings! |