A reread

Good story. I can only hope that Emmett will find his happily ever after, despite the cliffy at the end! Also, really hot and steamy lemons. Thanks for sharing!

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Holy hotness, Batman! That was soooooo sexy. Love the dirty talk.

Pleeeease
Continue the sequel
Pleeeease

I don’t usually review, just a browser but just wanted to say thank you for posting this story! Loved reading this.

i hope you do the sequel to this with Emmett and Rosalie. i read the but that was written before where Rosalie's father found Emmett and has him held captive in the shed and Rosalie begs Emmett that if she helps him to take her with him. i can't wait to see how it all ends. thank you, you are a fantastic writer and i hope you continue and finish the sequel. your reading friend Tammy

Really good story so far, but the changes of appearences are jarring to say the least. And what's with all the blonde hairs and blue eyes? And why emphasise them so much?

When you write something, please remember what you wronze in the chapters before it, because without this it doesn't make sense what you write. I really like your story until this chapter, where you contradict what you wrote some chapters before this one. Because only in the case that Bella had sex with the people her Dad paid to observe her, it doesn't really make sence, because she said she never was without them. Of you didn't want her do be a vergin, you should have known it since the beginning, so that Bella doesn't besicly say that she is one in one chapter and some chapters later she tells that she isn't.

Thanks for the rec have fun

I love this rec ..wish it was com0lete ..have fun

Great story thanks for sharing have fun

Wow! This was so amazing. I have really missed your writing and decided to finally read this story. I can’t wait to see what you come up with next!

Love this story, is anyone else correcting eye and hair color in their heads as they read? Or is it just me? Lol but for real am obsessed with the writing style

Good story.