Reviews for One Above All |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Keep the story going it’s interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() El macho |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pizza is the superor food |
![]() ![]() ![]() Menace Naruto is best naruto |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amber was in those movies too huh I had no idea |
![]() ![]() ![]() Moar cinnamon roll! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Praise the anime powers he cured himself of denseness and asked the girl out on a date. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I quite literally heard the "dem apples" line for the first time yesterday, less than 15 hours ago (Yeah, I watched Good Will Hunting for the first time, I'm an uncultured heathen). Weird coincidence. A good start, seems to have potential. I'm off to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() Lol so I’ve read the whole thing and all I can say is that This is all sorts of wacky. Naruto has enough power to basically bring the whole world to heel. He obviously won’t do that but he could. And yet, when he was declared a villain despite knowing of his power, the mother of his child who proclaimed to love him leaves him and steals his child from him. He then proceeds to f*ck off around the world while “his woman” apparently has several one night stands and his son grows up being treated like trash by society. This isn’t a happy story. It’s not a good love story. Naruto would never leave a child of his to experience the same childhood he did. Even if the woman he loved betrayed him and tried to enforce a ban on him seeing his son he would never stand for it. You’ve made naruto a spineless simp who caters to those much weaker to him. Simping after a woman who betrayed him and allowing his son to suffer from a similar childhood to him. It seems like youre trying to make it all seem romantic and like Naruto had no choice but ultimately it boils down to what ive said above. He gets unfairly accused of villainy. The woman who proclaims to love him betrays him and steals his child. He disappears and leaves his child to a life of misery while “his woman” keeps betraying him. Terrible take. Sorry for being rude, but I couldn’t keep it in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good to see u back man |
![]() ![]() ![]() Binged and enjoyed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you still updating seals are easy people are hard? That fic was gold. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello author, do you ever plan to update Seals are Easy, People are Hard again? I and the rest of your readers would appreciate a response as we really like this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did Izuku get OFA here or not? If he did, eill the vestiges awaken and I'm kinda interested on how they will interact with chakra. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's quite funny Izuku did that date proposal on phone while he met nejire later and it's quite boring to wait for bakugo to face his consequences. Waiting for your next update |