|Reviews for A Half Decent World|
| sunshinelexi chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
Aww so poetic T.T
| timme chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
it's good (as usual of your drabbles). but the part about sakura (air) made little sense. just didn't connect, i think, even with her shippuuden self. unless we're talking about an AU or OOC sakura
| LucidKren chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
Good job. You wrote it very well and the story itself is splendid.
| Mantinas chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
| Senko chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
hm...there is a harmony and balance in the way you described them. Ofcourse this was intentional on your part, nut I just wanted to comment that I loved how you painted this whole world encompassing the four of them. It really brought a vivid picture in my mind.
| Mystik-chan chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
That was a sexy fic. D And fun yaoi undercurrents. XD
Well written and lovely. I worship you.
| angelkicat chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
I love you... *sniff* So. Damn. Good...
| Keo Siph chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
Gar... SasuNaru again.
And still good. That's lo~ow to us other peeps.
Non-yaoi, not Anti-yaoi, and that crud.
... I still like it! I feel like a traitor!
| insanechildfanfic chapter 1 . 3/2/2004
this is great
| Feirdra chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
Fire also lights things up, and lets you see the true face of things... even if you don't want to.
Yay for earth! *kisses the ground*
| Yukichu chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
Extremely good, probably one of the most unique fics I've read in a long while. _ Great job!
| Vasiliki chapter 1 . 10/31/2003
That was very good.
| PinkyLemon chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
Egad, I love this! Mwa! (PinkyLemon kiss of approval ~_~)
| dogsruleW chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
That was good! Wow, you sure think a lot! None of that stuff would have ever crossed my mind -_-
| Yankoku chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
So good...I love 'His fire will renew me, her wind shape me, the teacher's water carve through me...'. And 'We've made a half-decent world.' Oh yeah. That rocks.