Fantastic story. Can't wait to read part 3.

I wonder if this is a trap. Like Renee said, they have no more ties to him or the community.

Oh, my. This can't be happening. Is she dreaming?

I had a great time reading this fiction.
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.

So many great chapter, so many unexpected situations...it was really thrilling and I loved it! Thanks for that!

Such a wonderful story. Can't wait for the next installment.

This sequel is even better than the first. It’s one of those stories that, when you know the twists, you want to immediately read it again to spot the clues. Brilliant, wonderful, cleverly written story. Thank you so very much.

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Athough im not really into sequels especially many years after sequels I have to confess that I really enjoyed it. It had the right amount of plot,crime, love suspense and despair. I especially enjoyed that the emotions were running high. I don’t particularly enjoy Edward and Bella fighting and not represent a united front, I somehow felt there is a hidden cause for that. Thank you for the great nights of reading this enjoyable story.

Wow. Just wow.
I guess there were some things they just needed to work through.
But I had faith they would get through this.
They'll be even stronger.
A third installment.
Right now my heart can't take it. Lol
But I'm so in.
Thank you for sharing.
This has to be one of my favourite Mafia fics for sure.
While I refused to believe he would kill Bella, you had me at their fighting. I thought it was just the stress and emotions, but the plan had me fooled somewhat.
I knew there was more to the prologue, just not what.
Loved this so much.
Even though my heart needs to calm first, I'm looking forward to seeing what you have up your sleeve.

Go Bella.
Gianna really played into their hands.
Had no idea it was all part of the plan.
But love that she got her karma.
She was so delusional to think Edward wanted her.

Love Quinn's outlook.
I didn't think they meant all they were saying. Just thought it was down to the stress of it all.
But to be part of the plan.
Well played.
Both you and them.
Very clever. Burner phones.
So was Bella meeting him in the basement after all?

I have faith they'll work through it.
They've come to far to loose it all now.

I didn't think for one minute she was dead.
I couldn't see Edward doing it.
But I did shed a tear when she showed up.
Not sure what Quinns role is.
But maybe the other operative is the mole and using Quinn as bait seeing they know Edward is coming or was quinn trying to get Edward killed for Killing his mother.

Yeah, the fact he shot his wife.
She'll have his balls.
I still refuse to believe she's dead.
He shot her in the chest, not the head.
Either that or I'm just in denial.
Jasper hasn't said much. But then he took his own wife out.