Reviews for A Harmonious Beginning
A10riddick chapter 1 . 7/3/2024
Great start!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 109 . 7/3/2024
Excellent work as always! Looking forward to the next chapter! Also, I’m planning on giving this a re-read for old times sake. It’s a fantastic story and I just love it!
Hands Off MY Wolfie chapter 109 . 7/3/2024
Quidditch tryouts - some were really inept. Who knows how I'd do on a broom, maybe one of the earlier cuts. LOL I liked that choices were really a vote with Angelina being the last word.

Weasley Twins' proteges in Crabbe and Goyle, who would have thought the 'snakes' would be afraid of snakes.

Thanks for sharing.
dennisud chapter 109 . 7/3/2024
That chapter was very entertaining and allows for some more events to happen, Ron not getting the Keepers position for one.
KEZZ 1 chapter 109 . 7/3/2024
Brilliant chapter Thankyou
kgfinkel chapter 109 . 7/3/2024
Yay! You're still here!

Great chapter, that was a more involved look into how the team is built up.

Was the snakes thing Greg and Vince' prank?
Dretnuh chapter 18 . 6/26/2024
Not gonna lie. I for some reason thought he was talking about Anakin Skywalker and starwars when he said a dark haired individual who likes to fly. As soon as she said the beach scene tho I was like “oh topgun!” Lmao. And as soon as I realized that I was like oh wait Anakin is like blonde and the prequels wouldn’t have been out in the 90’s XD lmao
Dretnuh chapter 12 . 6/26/2024
FINALLY A FIC WHERE SOMEONE TAKES THE KINGS SPOT ON THE CHESSBOARD! I always thought it was so stupid that in every fic nobody take the kings place. Its like… uh hello? The king doesn’t have be hit even if you lose… literally it just being in danger makes you lose so even if you lose whoever’s in that spot won’t get smacked by the giant stone statues lmao.
Dretnuh chapter 4 . 6/26/2024
I’ve never actually thought of this before, but isn’t saying the Slytherins are snakes like saying the Ravenclaws are just birds instead of eagles? Lol
Dretnuh chapter 2 . 6/26/2024
Okay, but loneliness is not an accurate judge of someones character lmao. Like I’m pretty sure a good chunk of Rapists or murderers would also be described as lonely in their personal life lmao.
Vvolfreichthe lone Titan chapter 108 . 6/12/2024
excellent work as always though that cliffhanger leaves me chomping at the bit for more
mintuo chapter 108 . 6/10/2024
Alles Prima, ich brauche mehr,mehr, mehr noch mehr!
Schnuff chapter 108 . 6/7/2024
And another story with highly risk of abandoned status.
kaijuka chapter 39 . 6/5/2024
love the subtle inclusion of Nicolas flamel. i wonder if he knew who harry and hermione are and wanted to meet them before the last of his elixer ran out, or if it was purely coincidence.
Wrixel chapter 7 . 5/27/2024
I very much enjoyed this chapter, thank you.
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