Reviews for A Harmonious Beginning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent work as always! Looking forward to the next chapter! Also, I’m planning on giving this a re-read for old times sake. It’s a fantastic story and I just love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quidditch tryouts - some were really inept. Who knows how I'd do on a broom, maybe one of the earlier cuts. LOL I liked that choices were really a vote with Angelina being the last word. Weasley Twins' proteges in Crabbe and Goyle, who would have thought the 'snakes' would be afraid of snakes. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That chapter was very entertaining and allows for some more events to happen, Ron not getting the Keepers position for one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant chapter Thankyou |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! You're still here! Great chapter, that was a more involved look into how the team is built up. Was the snakes thing Greg and Vince' prank? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not gonna lie. I for some reason thought he was talking about Anakin Skywalker and starwars when he said a dark haired individual who likes to fly. As soon as she said the beach scene tho I was like “oh topgun!” Lmao. And as soon as I realized that I was like oh wait Anakin is like blonde and the prequels wouldn’t have been out in the 90’s XD lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY A FIC WHERE SOMEONE TAKES THE KINGS SPOT ON THE CHESSBOARD! I always thought it was so stupid that in every fic nobody take the kings place. Its like… uh hello? The king doesn’t have be hit even if you lose… literally it just being in danger makes you lose so even if you lose whoever’s in that spot won’t get smacked by the giant stone statues lmao. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve never actually thought of this before, but isn’t saying the Slytherins are snakes like saying the Ravenclaws are just birds instead of eagles? Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, but loneliness is not an accurate judge of someones character lmao. Like I’m pretty sure a good chunk of Rapists or murderers would also be described as lonely in their personal life lmao. |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent work as always though that cliffhanger leaves me chomping at the bit for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alles Prima, ich brauche mehr,mehr, mehr noch mehr! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And another story with highly risk of abandoned status. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the subtle inclusion of Nicolas flamel. i wonder if he knew who harry and hermione are and wanted to meet them before the last of his elixer ran out, or if it was purely coincidence. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I very much enjoyed this chapter, thank you. |