So good

Great chapter, and to quote dumbledore (from the HBP filmshiversoh to be young, and to feel loves keen sting"! Anyways, thank you and take care,

SOB

Great chapter!

I'm assuming it's Dobby still after his mail. Is it to keep Harry from Hogwarts or is Lucius trying to find out where he is?

I like the idea of spell chains. Often in video games opponents can dodge the first attack, it's effectively using them to set up the next hit that gets them an increases difficulty of avoidance.

Just found this and read up to here. In regards to plagiarism: I read multitudes of Harmony fanfics and I quite like this and find it different enough. After so many years of H.P. fanfiction there is almost nothing that hasn't been done before multiple times by multiple people. Unless you are word for word lifting scenes from another fic or have every element of your story the same, comments like that are stupid. I shake my head and think, yeah go cry to Ms. Rowling about it.

Thanks for the update.
I'm not surprised that Harry enjoyed Top Gun.
I wonder about his reaction on Star Wars.

I'd suggest you name a chapter when Harry asks Hermione to be his girlfriend as 'My brown eyed girl' loved the new chapter as always

nice that Harry is doing better.

Great chapter! Loved the top gun bit, it was one of my dad’s favorite movies. The anniversary of his death was a few days ago so this cheered me up a bit. :)

Awaiting more.

So good

Lost one family and got many in return.

'Walking' back and forth across a pool?

The interview scene had to be hard for Harry. It took a lot of trust for that to happen.

Song suggestion: Every Time Two Fools Collide. I may have suggested that before - I don't know. This one shouldn't be in reference to HHr, but mayyyyyybe Ron and Lavender later on.

Loved it cheers! Take care,

SOB