Reviews for A Harmonious Beginning
IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 9 . 5/15/2021
Very nice!
jkarr chapter 9 . 5/15/2021
it is nice that Harry is getting to spend time with Hermione and her folks
polarbear20000 chapter 9 . 5/15/2021
Heh. The doe eyes comment reminded me of the 12th Doctor: "Eyes out to here!"

Good chapter, quite a bit of enjoyable pieces.
IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 8 . 5/15/2021
Thanks for the update!
rb2312 chapter 7 . 5/12/2021
One of the best troll battles i have read
polarbear20000 chapter 8 . 5/12/2021
This is a good chapter. Of course, Harry's trying to mask his injuries - being an abused child, that's 'normal' for him. He doesn't know any better. Hopefully things will happen to put some steel in that spine.

I'm glad to see that the Slytherins are being reached out to. That will change the story a good deal in itself!

Looking forward to more of this wonderful story.
kyberheart chapter 8 . 5/12/2021
I’m really enjoying this take on their first year with a Harry that’s more appreciative of Hermione, and a Hermione that learns how to make friends sooner (with his help)! Great job!
jkarr chapter 8 . 5/12/2021
Hope Madam Pomfre told some one other then Pro. McG
Sazert chapter 8 . 5/12/2021
Well, this kind of Dumbledore will be a good change, almost every history I've read lately has a greater good Dumbledore
B53 chapter 7 . 5/10/2021
I love it. Keep up the great work.
jkarr chapter 7 . 5/10/2021
it is nice that Harry is going to be ok, this is a nice story looking forward to next chapter
Sazert chapter 7 . 5/10/2021
Nice, Hermione wasn't a damsel in distress which i loved
I really love this story
Guest chapter 3 . 5/8/2021
I've not even finished the chapter but can I say how refreshing it is to see harry liken 4 Privet Drive to a prison from a Muggle point of view.
Loving it so far.
tlc125 chapter 7 . 5/10/2021
Great update. Thanks.
majijn chapter 7 . 5/10/2021
im pretty sure they should have to go to the hospital wing after that

harry cant walk with those injuries
hermione'd be terrified seeing him so injured theyd both need a sleepjng draught or dreamless sleep and a calming draught.
harry'd nees to get his bones mended and lay down for the next couple of daays to heal the musclulature that is torn from the hit and the landing
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