Reviews for A Harmonious Beginning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it is nice that Harry is getting to spend time with Hermione and her folks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh. The doe eyes comment reminded me of the 12th Doctor: "Eyes out to here!" Good chapter, quite a bit of enjoyable pieces. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of the best troll battles i have read |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good chapter. Of course, Harry's trying to mask his injuries - being an abused child, that's 'normal' for him. He doesn't know any better. Hopefully things will happen to put some steel in that spine. I'm glad to see that the Slytherins are being reached out to. That will change the story a good deal in itself! Looking forward to more of this wonderful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m really enjoying this take on their first year with a Harry that’s more appreciative of Hermione, and a Hermione that learns how to make friends sooner (with his help)! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope Madam Pomfre told some one other then Pro. McG |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, this kind of Dumbledore will be a good change, almost every history I've read lately has a greater good Dumbledore |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. Keep up the great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it is nice that Harry is going to be ok, this is a nice story looking forward to next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, Hermione wasn't a damsel in distress which i loved I really love this story |
![]() ![]() I've not even finished the chapter but can I say how refreshing it is to see harry liken 4 Privet Drive to a prison from a Muggle point of view. Loving it so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great update. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() im pretty sure they should have to go to the hospital wing after that harry cant walk with those injuries hermione'd be terrified seeing him so injured theyd both need a sleepjng draught or dreamless sleep and a calming draught. harry'd nees to get his bones mended and lay down for the next couple of daays to heal the musclulature that is torn from the hit and the landing |