Reviews for A Harmonious Beginning |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() woohoo, waiting for the next chap |
![]() ![]() Thank you for writing this story. I love it so far and I’m eagerly waiting for the next chapter so I can see them arriving at Hogwarts and getting sorted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice Chapter, i think this length is ok, though i think that harry thinking Hermione's giggle is cute is pretty soon, i mean it's the first day they have met and they are 11 year old Anyway, it could be just to put the idea of Harry thinking that she's cute but at leats till 3rd year i don't think they should be very conscius of their feelings to each other As i said it's what i think but even like that i still like the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I simply love the chemistry you have between Harry and Hermione even though they just met. Ps: too bad nobody told their dreams to each other while being questioned |
![]() ![]() ![]() This seems like it's going to be absolutely brilliant! I can hardly wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks! I'm looking forward to reading this story! It's an excellent start. The chapters seem very short, is that just because it's an intro? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you. Good start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so far. Love how Harry immediately gets along with Hermione's parents, and your use of song titles for chapter titles. I always thought I was the only one to do that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story so far. Keep going! As for song titles, I frankly was not paying attention to that - I was too busy thinking of username-related puns but got stuck. At least you're not doing seventh chord diminished. Never diminish a good Harmony story! Well, unless you have a good drama plotted out. There is so much music out there. Since this is magic (and a Harmony story) how around "It Takes Believers to Be Lovers" by Mickey Gilley and Charly McClain. Granted that one should wait several years first. "You're Such a Beautiful Child" by Archie Bell and the Drells. "Trouble in the Shadows" by Sheena Easton. "Every Time You Cross My Mind (You Break My Heart) by Razzy. This one is a cover, I think. I can't remember now. Yes, I dug out my vinyl and didn't look at my CDs yet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice introduction, maybe a little short but was okay. PD: Because of chapter's title i icouldn't help to think un the Beatles xd |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Small introduction but prettt interesting. I hope the next chapter is longer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice beginning, can't wait to see where you go with it |