Reviews for A Harmonious Beginning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was so sad. The emotional impact is so much larger because we get to know Cedric as a character and a friend. I also wanted to say how much I appreciate your inclusion of LGBTQ characters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! That was completely fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() For something that you feel didn’t flow together it came out wonderfully. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m really digging these song titles. This chapter really packed an emotional punch for me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really well done. I am wondering, though didn’t the Rangers have special words up?T |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi again. First, I want to say that I’m enjoying this ficimmensely. Also, I love that every chapter is a song title. That’s so great! One of the things that really got my attention is the fact that hair reacted to the Dementer in a way that I thought was much more authentic than in the books. Thank you so much for this wonderful story. Excuse any errors as dictation doesn’t always want to say what I needed to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m glad Dumbledore is waking up. It’s about time! I can’t wait to see what happens to Snape. He’s really being a poop head!I |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is the kind of Dumbledore chapter I’ve ever wanted to see in fanfiction. A man realizing that he screwed up and that he’s far from perfect. Hopefully he’ll keep working from there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbledore definitely has tunnel vision. It would only take a little nudge to have here becoming worse than Baltimore. Thank goodness for Neville and Hermione. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, I agree. Some of the things they went through were needless. I’m glad Harry is developing a friendship with Cedric. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the scene with Harry and Richard Granger watching the TV show. It’s something so normal that it’s really heartrending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was awesome! One of the best troll interpretations I’ve read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve always loved neville as a character and feel he was under utilized. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know it will start out close to the books, but so many changes can occur from this particular moment that I’m very much looking forward to it. |
![]() ![]() I’ve always wondered if when Harry realized his blood needed to be taken forcibly, he could’ve screwed their little ritual by just letting him have it willingly. Like would that have rendered it useless to Voldemort? |