Reviews for A Harmonious Beginning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() jesus F'ing christ, is Ron EVER gonna get his ass whooped? fuck, there's a point where it stops being "not stooping to their level' and starts being "you're just a little bitch". |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay, more prophecies. |
![]() ![]() I am really enjoying your storty - Your range of knowledge enhances your story telling. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Impressive writing. I hope you have continued to write. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kingsman Tailors! love those movies lol. love the reference |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying this tremendously I am afraid that you have so Many Side Players that they will get in your way of keeping the story moving. Thanks Ever So Much for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again Harry is cheated of his rightful anger. Correct response would beRon 'Friends?' Harry 'I promise not to kill you. Fair enough?" |
![]() ![]() ![]() I posted a review about Harry being soft and apologizing too much, and the next damn chapter, he says he feels sorry for Draco. Jesus Christ, he is allowed to have anger. he has a right to feel his emotions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm only half way through, but Harry apologizes too much. He had a right to his anger at Lupin. He didnt say one thing that was out of line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Most Excellent choices of Patroni! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I agree % . Ronald Weasley is a Horrible Person, no way would Hermione fall for and remain with Ron! As oh so many fanfics point out, Harry should have 2 wives. It could easily been Hermione (plus 1) at his side seeing Ron at the train with Lavender (?) . Harry should have Luna, maybe Ginny but the whole Oedipus complex is real. Thanks again for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love a young Lady Bones. Gives padfoot a woman to date... She would have been the youngest Head of the DMLE in... Well... Forever Thanks for the Excellent Story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Star Trek and Monty Python quotes! Oh My... There was something else but I forgot. Fun time! Great Story So Far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Last bit of the A/N; Magic is All About Intent! |