Reviews for A Harmonious Beginning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am looking forward to your next updates. I like this story and I binge read it when I keep coming back to it after a few months. I think I have read it 3 or 4 times so far. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't make myself read this. Too much cringe. Oozes fedora. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do like that Dumbles showed the memories all in one session - instead of dragging it out. What would have happened if he'd died early and Harry never saw the rest. Dobby and Winky - I'm happy they are joining and if it also makes Winky feel better about herself - so be it. They can also correct the story about Hokey that has lived for years. Thanks for sharing. I hope you are feeling much better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() welcome back! you (and your wonderful story) have been dearly missed... and you come bearing the gift of another great chapter... thank you for the wonderful use of your imagination. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great to see this one back in action. I'll have to go back to the start and re-read. (Oh, dear, however shall I manage? :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good work on this chapter. Truly enjoyed it and am so glad you’re back. Seems like Winky and Dobby are fully on board in bringing down Tom! Good to see. I can understand Hermione’s conflict when it comes to having them get involved, but it’s like she and Harry told them, they wanted to see them as individuals/partners. Not slaves/servants to order around willy nilly. So they must respect their choices even if they may not like it and worry for them. You can obviously tell that I really approved of you having Winky and Dobby see that memory with Hokey. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I loved the update I'm sorry to hear you weren't doing well and was in the hospital. I am glad you seem to be doing better. welcome back and thank you for the update. I enjoyed it. I hope Hermione doesn't throw too much of a fit. : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope that you're feeling better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant "which grime and dirt", "the purebloods' mission" and "Welcome to the fight". The Gaunt dad echoed to his daughter, Merope Gaunt, the words that the Dursleys said to Harry countless times. IMO Tom Riddle junior has imperiused Mrs. Cole so that she can't speak out about his bullying other inhabitants of the orphanage. I am livid that Dumbles told tom Riddle junior how to get to platform nine and three quarters but Hagrid did not afford Harry the same courtesy. I love every syllable of Dobby's rant. And of Winky's. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy Snotbuckets, you're ALIVE! I had almost given up hope that you would finish this story and that I'd have to consign it to the Bin of Abandoned Stories. I'm going to need to start over from the beginning (but it's not like that's a 'hardshiphaha)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved the first chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it |
![]() ![]() I absolutely love this story! I binged it and have no regrets. You are an amazing writer and I enjoy everyone’s competence in this reimagined fic. It makes this story so unique and refreshing. Please keep writing cause I am loving reading! |